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When We Were Yesterday (Nestorian Sonnet)

Ah not so long ago, when we were us, time was all ours! We let our spirits happily sway in the great fountain Of faith, where we etched our own history counting the stars Fluttered in the night sky. Oh, what a passion we had then! And I kept you in the rosy earth of my heart so glee. That when you returned, back from a lady boot shaped country, And seeing you one day, alone, under the glimmers of A retreating sun, I hurried my shadow along the Street of for old time sake to hug you, to express my love. When I had you there was no such hunger, nor thirst in me. But now as I embraced you, I hardly felt the warmth of Your blood. I wonder why; is it ‘cause now a cold season, Or maybe jet lag still eats you? Sure you’ll take yourself off From my reasoning, and be more fixed on your salvation. * Nestorian Sonnet is a variant form of old sonnet and in it are three quatrains that rhyme, with fourteen syllables in each line. Line five rhymes with line ten and it is not necessary to end it with a rhyming couplet.

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Date: 6/3/2010 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Ernesto. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 7:03:00 AM
congrats my naughty boy have not heard from you for a while now hope all is safe in your homeland and wish you were here great write as always keep up the nice writing enjoyed
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Date: 5/12/2010 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write this week
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Date: 5/12/2010 9:59:00 AM
Congrats Ernesto, on your Nestorian Sonnett being featured. Vince
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Date: 5/12/2010 2:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Ernesto. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2010 1:42:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/9/2010 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured on the Soups Homepage >> James
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Date: 12/21/2009 7:30:00 AM
Miss you, my friend. I agree with Karen on this one. Such a challenging form as well. Wishing you a Joyous Christmas and all the best in the New Year. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/17/2009 12:31:00 AM
good work'
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Date: 11/7/2009 5:13:00 AM
enjoyable read! Otsenre! well done! jimbo
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Date: 11/4/2009 11:42:00 PM
A pretty well written Sonnet, Otsenre! Y muchas gracis por tu comentario de Atacama! I have also posted a German and an English version on soup. Have a good week and keep your pen flowing. Muchos saludos de Gert
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