When We Kiss

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: lines 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required.

Love Poem using words four letters or less
Sponsored by: Darla Seely
09/28/20

I love you more than you know, for you are my soul mate. When we kiss, we meld into one; there is no one else. We walk hand in hand and I feel your warm palm warm mine. And soon, I feel my temp rise; for you turn me on.

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/1/2023 5:14:00 AM

Very nicely done, Emile:) thank you for my placement in Seven-ten contest:)

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/1/2023 7:15:00 AM

Thanks, Joanna; as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/30/2023 9:08:00 AM

Ahh, this is just a brilliant Yalto, Emile! Best of luck in the contest, my friend.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/30/2023 11:27:00 AM

Thanks, Edward; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Lin Lane

Date: 9/28/2023 4:46:00 PM

Romantically seductive, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2023 8:25:00 AM

Thanks, Lin; you have brought a ray of sunshine to my day, my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/28/2023 10:46:00 AM

Hello Emile, oh so romantic. My friend. enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2023 3:13:00 PM

Hello Emile ,Your welcome my dear friend. Enjoy your evening ./ Darlene/

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/28/2023 11:16:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.