When Through the Keyhold He Did Peep

When through the keyhole he did peep,
he saw his parents on their bed.
He thought that they would be asleep.
But something else he saw instead.

He thought they’d heard him at the door
when through the keyhole he did peep.
He ran away in silence, for
he feared to be in trouble deep.

He’d seen them lying with a heap
of snacks he’d never known about.
When through the keyhole he did peep,
at last their secret he found out!

“No chips or cookies given me,”
their young son thought, “they are so cheap!”
What awesome junk food he could see
when through the keyhole he did peep.

Jan. 22, 2019 for John Lawless' Slap Muse And Turn It Loose Poetry Contest
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Halliday Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 3:19 AM
Cute. Thought it was going to be risque thee for a second.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 8:01 PM
Congratulations, Andrea!
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Delightful poem, Andrea. We feel his pain. Congrats on your win.
Laurie Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 8:44 PM
G'day Andrea … food for thought I reckon. Thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Faulkner Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 1:44 PM
Hah, the kid caught them, red-handed, good one!
Fairchild Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 9:17 PM
Turnabout is fair play -- maybe he should hoard the pizza when the delivery guy comes while his parents are away.
Bauer Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 6:54 PM
hilarious, andrea! so clever of you!
Horne Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 3:18 PM
LOL, cute write here, my friend
Devonshire Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 1:14 PM
:) Well, you know I was expecting him to see something else while peeping through the keyhole, but you turned it around and gave me quite a laugh! Best wishes in the contest, Andrea
Krutsinger Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 12:33 PM
It is with grave relief that I read the rest of the story in this form, Andrea. Loved it.
Smith Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 11:48 AM
What many secrets found through keyholes, good one Andrea, best wishes...
Proxenos Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 10:59 AM
A clever poem Andrea, we all expected that he saw more than snacks! Very nicely penned my friend. Poetry hugs, Jenny.
Pandit Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Thank goodness it was just the snacks he saw..good flow to your poem, Andrea.
May Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Well done this is a winner for sure my friend!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 9:37 AM
Lol! Not where I expected you to go ;D Good luck in the contest! xomo
Y. Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 9:37 AM
Hi Andrea, I thought he saw something else as he looked through the peep hole. Great twist at the end. I wish you the best of luck for the contest:-) Alexis Soup mail
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 9:13 AM
LOL...mean parents! Love the twist!
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