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When the World Was Quiet

When the world was quiet and life moved with grace, time measured by seasons and years instead of minutes, and people saw the world as close by, with foreign lands far away, another universe, not quite real, not quite true-- then the mind could rest, enjoy the simple pleasures of family and friends and old neighbors to share old tales.... Life was taken slowly then, no faster than a carriage ride, and evil belonged mainly in crusty books of ancient times. There was no rancor, no bile stirred by relentlessly biting news that chews at the soul like the devil's own pitchfork. There was no magic screen to capture you slave-like and bound for barren lands filled with children starving, babes dying before they walked, and War and Disease and Death all coming through an open door. Once we trod the earth unshod and breathed the virgin air and sang love songs to God in heaven and saw others as brothers, some lost, others newly found, all to be welcome, all to be heard and seen. Now we see the other as less than, as missing our noble sweetness-- sure we have found the truth and those who do not march alongside, must march against us-- we need no god to be on our side to know what must be done for justice.... A poet like Emily could write in peace though a terrible slaughter raged far away, its madness slow to reach her ears, giving her time to let it sweep her untamed soul. But she could not breathe today, her spirit smothered by the loss of distance and time and mercy. When the world was quiet and life moved with grace, we had a sense of ourselves, our footing in this world, our dreams of the next....

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Date: 1/10/2020 7:05:00 AM
LJ here to congratulate you on your HM!;)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/10/2020 9:54:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda
Date: 1/9/2020 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations L.J.! Your words - so true. It takes a choice to dedicate time to slow down and listen to the voice of God in this world. Very nicely done. Love the way you created a framework for the poem through the use of inclusion!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/10/2020 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Sam-- I always love it when there's some exegesis! It means the reader is actually thinking about the poem....
Date: 6/15/2019 6:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win, LJ. It certainly is lovely to think of days when time was blissfully slow.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/16/2019 2:52:00 PM
Thank you, Line-- yes, for all we've gained in ease, we may have lost in that what which waters the soul.
Date: 4/13/2018 8:17:00 PM
Lovely dreamy write - but I am not so sure life was ever that idyllic. As history teaches us, evil existed everywhere and at every time, not just in crusty books. War, disease and death brought sorrow to people's doorstep - without screens and news from faraway lands.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/14/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, and you're right of course, Agnes-- there has always been death and disease and evil in the world-- I was trying to picture what it might have been like in a time when there was no mass media to 'immerse' ALL of us in that ALL the time-- and yes, the poem is a bit naive in tone, but I wonder if people might have had a different 'consciousness' back then.
Date: 4/11/2018 7:03:00 PM
Hi, I really get what you are saying here. But I guess being a baby boomer, I have seen the best of both worlds and am glad to have experienced both. I think time got super fast after the 70's!!! Great writing.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/11/2018 9:48:00 PM
As a fellow baby boomer, I appreciate your appreciation-- not really sure where our brave new world is going, Andrea, but I believe ultimately it's in God's hands, one way or another. Thanks again.

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