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When the Sky Rained Nectar

As the scurrying clouds clashed and broke Sparks of light cut instant pathways Thunder stamped across the darkening sky Like an enraged beast, violently hurt Witnessing this accident of a collision, The sky’s bosom heaved in suppressed pain In her sunken eyes, tears flooded unawares And fell, drop by drop in deep dismay The cacophonous wind joined in a waltz With the drops tumbling out of tune Holding hands from heaven’s heights, They together came down in violent clatter The grass and plants had a passionate romance With this spill out from sky’s seamless heights Drunk with heavenly elixir, the thirsty earth lay content And glossy leaves giggled, washed clean of all dirt As rain cleanses the earth and bathes the plants It douses the heat and fire in racked minds With sonorous whispers and cooling jets of balm, It ignites poets’ fancy to compose verse and soar high November.8.2022 ~Placed First~ Inspiring Rainy Days Poetry Contest Sponsor- Sotto Poet

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Date: 11/13/2022 3:39:00 PM
Congrats on your top win for this very elegant poem, Valsa.
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Date: 11/13/2022 10:53:00 AM
- This was beautiful, Valsa :) - Love the title - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
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Date: 11/12/2022 11:22:00 PM
Congratulation on your awesome win with this great imagery and feelings. Many blessing my friend
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Date: 11/12/2022 7:57:00 PM
You have illustrated beautiful scenes of the monsoon. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/12/2022 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on taking first place in my contest. You created such beautiful poetry, full of analogies and lovely rhymes.
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Date: 11/8/2022 8:50:00 AM
Rich panorama! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 11/8/2022 7:17:00 AM
The imagery and pssion in this poem is very engaging, Valsa. The beauty of the blessings in nature gives us hope of healing in our world of darkened skies, enraged beast, and violent hate. Thanks for sharing your contest entry with us, my dear friend. It should do well. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 11/8/2022 5:18:00 AM
So much inspiration in beauty and wonders of nature-- as you so eloquently convey, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 11/8/2022 1:11:00 AM
Your poetry soars high. You did very well. Best for a win.
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Date: 11/7/2022 6:07:00 PM
Beautiful write! Enjoyed :)
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