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When the Mist Has Rolled Away

Upon the highlands Few have walked, except the brave That seek a closer embrace With the divine plan. Like persian carpets Evergreen spread at the feet Of tall rugged physiques Of guards against threats Of unholy plights That rape life by hands of greed That ever their sheer majesty That loves the sunlight Captures the sweet mist That kisses its surfaces Each dawn, remains untainted That heaven be missed. CarolineCécile copyright 04.15.11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/2/2011 4:34:00 AM
Superb writing Caroline. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
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Date: 4/30/2011 11:31:00 PM
Ahhhh, Now this is poetry at its best! Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Caroline. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 9:48:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week.I enjoyed reading the poem
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Date: 4/26/2011 6:11:00 AM
Stunningly beautiful and serene. There are so few places left on on earth that remain untainted. Many congrats on this fine feature of the week, Caroline. Lainie
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Date: 4/25/2011 4:55:00 PM
Congrats on the feature. This is a wonderful piece with beautiful imagery. N:)
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Date: 4/25/2011 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on this great work being featured this week on homepage..Enjoyed reading very much.Sara
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congrats Caroline on your featured poem this week.. a wonderful piece to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 4/25/2011 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured on the soup
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:18:00 PM
very creative piece of fine poetry, enjoyed reading. thank you for reading Summer Gone and for your comment.
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Date: 4/15/2011 7:54:00 PM
VEry beautiful images in this choka!
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:30:00 PM
Beautiful images , Caroline
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:34:00 PM
beautiful caroline,and if i might say,i think i'll be using the choka form moreso than the haiku or senryu,but with the same intent of course...vivid images here provoke a part of the mind to rest :)
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