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With eyes closed I still saw in the dark My heart took my hand to serve as guide It's the light from within that was my spark when my outward flame flickered and died. Nothing and no one will control me again I've traversed that road too many times. Not even those who became a false friend those ones I see as though they are mimes. Some try to extinguish the flame of my candle but that will not make their flames glow bright Bad intentions of others are not hard to handle I know where I am headed without candlelight. With eyes open wide, but closed to intimidation I use the blustering of others for my inspiration.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/14/2016 3:10:00 PM
Dear Lin Lane Forgot had a blonde moment thanks very much also for your review on my poem, it means alot just got caught up in yours, woops, cheri
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Date: 1/14/2016 3:16:00 PM
You're very welcome.
Date: 1/14/2016 3:09:00 PM
Dear Lin Lane Now I love this poem very much you stick to your guns girlfriend, and strive forward to your drumming beat! Keep that light strong don't let any ill winders take you down, this is powerful piece of standing tall, again loved it my friend, don't let anyone change you understand, for you are one awesome individual, and a great poet here on the soup, take care and you have a wonderful weekend coming up, cheri
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Date: 1/14/2016 3:16:00 PM
I've learned the hard way to be my own drummer, Cheryl Thank you for such nice comments.
Date: 1/14/2016 1:30:00 PM
A fine sonnet, Lin. The light within is all important, it attracts others to us. We are not islands unto ourselves, to put it in an old fashioned conceit. BTW, my poem was rhetorical, really. I write what I please. I can't please everyone. Best to you in your writings. M
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Date: 1/14/2016 1:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maurice.
Date: 1/13/2016 9:44:00 AM
this uplifts, lin.. wonderful flow of word choice.. huggs
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Date: 1/13/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Nette.. hugs back to ya!
Date: 1/13/2016 9:40:00 AM
an heartfelt write Lin...excellent
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thank you, kind sir.

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