When the Colors Fade

my spirit hovers in a land without color only shadows between dark and light in youth the hues were vibrant but now there are only forms in shades of boldness oh, to bring the color back into my world perhaps a magical return to childhood you offer roses; their outlines I see but they blend in with the untinted scenery what was green what was red what painted the sunset... this beauty I no longer see since you left my side and loneliness encumbers me

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Date: 8/4/2011 7:18:00 PM
The power of sadness resonates in this piece Carolyn. Having endured many lonely years in my marriage, I do see some colours and hopefully roses in my future. I do hope that something magical awaits around the corner for you :)
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:55:00 PM
Awesome entry Carolyn, best of wishes to you. Nette will like this one. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:44:00 PM
you know i always love reading your poems such powerful point as always i hope you are keep well my dear carolyn love duncan and ceizar
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:26:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous, Seafaress!! Congratulations on your win!! Totally one for my Favs. List! I'm glad I did not miss this. Just beautiful... Much love, Annalise
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Date: 7/18/2011 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest.I really missed your poetry while I was absent on P.S.
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:21:00 AM
hello ma, do you still have me as ur son, i hope it is well with you? thanks for sharing this poem.
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Date: 7/16/2011 7:28:00 AM
EASILY the best poem I have read in a long time. Sad is a heavy price to pay for amazing poetry. I relate to this on so many levels.
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Date: 7/15/2011 8:20:00 AM
A unique poem- good luck in the contest. Wrote a poem- for I see you needed one more to close the contest- but this morning I see it was filled but made me do some research on it last night and then on TV was a series about the stone monuments around the world. Interesting facts and more interesting is the coral gardens in Florida which is the last large rock formation built in the 50s. Stonehenge is one of many. love phyl
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:01:00 PM
wow, what a creative way to do grey. I see you chose a color then not your favorite? But a very well done poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/14/2011 5:22:00 PM
Introspective, descriptive, fantasy. Very nice read. I like it very much!
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Date: 7/14/2011 3:15:00 PM
A study in black and white. This is sadly beautiful, like the Warner Brothers movies I used to see as a kid - black and white, with serious music and very dramatic actors. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/14/2011 1:57:00 PM
I hear you! I'm afraid you are getting too depressed...I hope your parasailing brightenes your eyes and skies! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 7/14/2011 1:28:00 PM
Carolyn, I've been abscent for a while, and as I return, you are one of the first PS poet's I've looked up...how true the thoughts in this poem ring...you speak my thoughts, in such vivid clarity...I hope to learn much from your writings as I challenge my own inner thoughts to pen. Thank you for your words...Michael
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Date: 7/14/2011 7:30:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette,Carolyn
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Date: 7/14/2011 6:07:00 AM
Congrats Carolyn on your fine write and win.....hope your feeling better...love Michael
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Date: 7/14/2011 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations for your win...........!
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Date: 7/14/2011 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Carolyn in Nette's "Color My World" Contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:01:00 PM
Very touching, Carolyn. Many congrats on your super win with this heart-wrenching piece. Lainie
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Date: 7/13/2011 5:13:00 PM
grey....we had the same choice....congrats on the win!
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Date: 7/13/2011 7:57:00 AM
Carolyn my dear poet, this write is so real, it is inspiring. You have captured 'loneliness' so vividly in this poetry, I just want to hug someone and bring the vibrant colours back into their life ! Awesome write dear friend, and hang in there, Jehovah's great day is coming love ! Have a wonderful week Carolyn ! Much love(2u), james
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:09:00 AM
Oh how the colours took on bright as their warm flesh fused. And the magician caused youth; begetting lost sight *winkers*
Date: 7/13/2011 6:07:00 AM
A poignant yet beautiful entry for Nette's contest Carolyn.. Good luck to you :) lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/12/2011 11:23:00 PM
Very nice Carolyn....very touching write.....the colour of this poem is sure grey.
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Date: 7/12/2011 6:01:00 PM
nicely done. I was thinking of something along the same line. maybe i need to rethink it since yours says it all. the ending is fabulous.
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