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When the Child Knew How To Listen

Some search frantically for the pot of gold Perpetually dissatisfied, and disgusted, feeling cheated. Not understanding the contentment of those who hear Their internal whispers, who receive validation in the form of chills or goosebumps during prayer or meditation Some waste their lifetime on wishes, coveting the peace of others Never listening to their pleading quiet soul Who is reaching out to them in their slumber, for there is no other clear way to reach them. Bliss and peace could be theirs All they have to do is start fresh with their own childhood hopes and dreams Remembering the idealism of their youthful self. The answers came easily back then, when they knew how to play When the frivolity and the joyful enthusiasm stopped, they forgot to listen to their heart. The mind said I will take over then, and she did. Unfortunately, completely out of align with the heart soul who once upon a time showed the child bliss, when the child knew how to listen. Contest: Inner Alignment Sponsor Unseeking Seeker Written 3/14/2021

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Date: 3/23/2021 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Love you line, "when the child knew how to listen." So True. It was listen or else. I you did not want the else. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/23/2021 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Paula I appreciate your comment
Date: 3/22/2021 9:59:00 AM
Wonderful Caren. "When the child knew how to listen" is a wonderful phrase of the inner child and all "little kids at heart." You really got in touch with that experience of looking for daisies in sidewalks. Congratulations on your win!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/23/2021 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Sam
Date: 3/20/2021 11:44:00 PM
Children listen even when we think they are not...Congrats Karen on your win :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/21/2021 12:11:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 3/20/2021 8:08:00 PM
Thank you for participating in the contest, Caren. Congratulations on your winning write, which resonates deep within. God bless
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/21/2021 12:12:00 AM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker. I appreciate it
Date: 3/15/2021 6:02:00 PM
Oh! Wonderful! So true! Children know how to listen to their body and and their thoughts. When and why do they lose this, and go for all sorts of nonsense? Your poem points to this important issue. Great write! Bravo, gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/15/2021 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. I appreciate it.

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