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When the Air Bends

I just pulled a little something Straight out of nothing With pen in hand I wrote it all down If you don't grab it when You see the air bend You have to wait till it comes back around I added a twist So the words would all fit Cause I love the way rhyming words sound It came with a melody Blown in by the breeze They went together like a night on the town I blew off the dust Removed some of the crust Added a verb along with a noun Bundled them up In yarns of thought Then wrapped them both in this poem neatly bound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/17/2017 1:35:00 PM
I especially enjoy a great poem about nothing, and thanks for yesterday's encouraging comments.
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Date: 5/17/2017 1:33:00 PM
I especially enjoy a great poem about nothing, and thanks for yesterday's encouraging comments.
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Date: 8/4/2016 10:11:00 PM
Ha, good job Mike, the older you get the longer it takes to come back around. Cheers for the enjoyable read, Regards, Craig
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Date: 8/4/2016 7:29:00 PM
You certainly have a knack for writing poems Mike; your a natural!:)
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Date: 8/4/2016 5:32:00 PM
love your description of writing a poem - I find if I dont grab those words and write them down straight away it is gone forever:-( Mike:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/4/2016 5:19:00 PM
I like your description of writing a poem, Mike. Keep writing!!!
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Date: 8/4/2016 4:21:00 PM
Mike, I like this! A creative way to describe writing a poem. And I like rhyme too. Blessings!
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