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When Summer Lets Go

Quote:  
“Nature's first green is gold, 
Her hardest hue to hold. 
Her early leaf's a flower; 
But only so an hour. 
Then leaf subsides to leaf, 
So Eden sank to grief, 
So dawn goes down to day 
Nothing gold can stay” 
... Robert Frost 

[Verse] 
It’s the hour of summer’s last breath, 
Golden days dancing on memory’s edge, 
The laughter of warmth and endless light, 
Now yielding to waning amber twilight. 
Softly, as the world exhales, 
We sense the hush of change in the air. 

[Chorus] 
Feel gentle, as summer’s farewell softly beckons, 
Embrace the harvest of golden dreams awakened, 
Be, in this turning, who we’re meant to be. 
Autumn comes—and the heart learns to just breathe. 

[Verse] 
Long shadows paint the fields in burnished tones, 
Leaves whisper secrets, letting go of their green, 
The hush of evening, a quiet invitation, 
To walk between seasons, to rest in reflection. 
The breeze, now crisp, speaks of endings and seeds sown, 
Of cozy hope wrapped in cooler dawns. 

[Chorus] 
Feel gentle, as summer’s farewell softly beckons, 
Embrace the harvest of golden dreams awakened, 
Be, in this turning, who we’re meant to be. 
Autumn comes—and the heart learns to just breathe. 

[Bridge] 
No fear of endings, only welcome in change, 
The sweet weight of warmth now softened in our hands. 
Hugs of memory, laughter etched in twilight’s glow, 
Ripening in silence, as new paths begin to grow. 

[Chorus – final] 
Feel gentle, as summer’s farewell softly beckons, 
Embrace the harvest of golden dreams awakened, 
Be, in this turning, who we’re meant to be. 
Autumn comes—and the heart learns to just breathe.
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Baker Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 9:31 PM
A lovely song, my friend. I enjoyed it to the end! Your poetry is a joy to read, Jay. Bill
George Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Wow... so beautiful is this song. Ready to accept every seasonal change as an opening to a new path. Lovely image too. Simply awesome, dear Jay ji.
Velasco Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 5:15 AM
This is lovely! The imagery is vivid, and the chorus feels warm and comforting. Great flow and mood!
Rose  Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 6:36 PM
I just finished singing this song to myself, lol that was fun !
Rose  Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 6:33 PM
I didn't know you wrote lyrics, you did this just like a pro would, enjoyed !
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 4:45 PM
beautifully flowing lyrics...I agree...autumn is a time for that much needed pause and deep breathing. I'm torn between letting summer go (I'm tired of the heat) and embracing the impending fall (I hate cold days) Still your poem is thoroughly captivating. Well done, have pleasant evening, Sara
Peck Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 12:14 PM
This is beautiful. I hate to let summer leave. I know it's hot, humid, dry, with fires and floods, and mosquitos, but I still love it. :)
Anaya Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Lovely lyrics, I felt very much the chorus "Autumn comes—and the heart learns to just breathe." "A summer's farewell beckons" Hopeful and God willing!
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 10:27 AM
- Really beautiful, Jay ... cherish the memories of the summer ... in autumn we will make new ones ... the golden memories :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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