When Summer is Gone

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Originally completed for a different contest but since it was closed entered into the Elegy contest because it fits both.

When Summer is gone along with substantial flowers,
a lingering memory, I wonder “were you here at all?”

It will only be, in each new Spring reviving,
that the iris near the tear duct blooms.

When Summer is gone and leaves float downstream
blains renew with a chill in the air,

and the maples and oaks lose
their grief stricken hues.

When Summer is gone, that means Spring too,
then Fall is the midpoint so far from you,

as the years yield their acorn pelts
I pumpkin-kiss and miss you.

When Summer is gone and the “I love you,” is silent,
in the deep drifts of the Winter white blanket,

still I hear your motherly voice in the wind,
emphatically reap your snowdrop smile.

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Date: 7/21/2024 5:40:00 AM
Quite beauteous poem, Kim. I have many fond memories of past summers, so I'm always a little sad when summer departs. Great writing. Blessings xox
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2024 4:48:00 PM
I appreciate you,! God bless you, Gina! xx
Date: 7/20/2024 9:05:00 PM
Love your gentle imagery, phrased so delicately, Kim! 'Snowdrop smiling,' gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2024 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 7/20/2024 3:33:00 PM
"It will only be, in each new Spring reviving, that the iris near the tear duct blooms." -- Wow, great line! "as the years yield their acorn pelts I pumpkin-kiss and miss you." In the shimmer of stream, we imagine a fond countenance smiling back -- love has highs and depths yet to fathom. Subject only briefly to a life of seasons.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2024 4:45:00 PM
Thank you, Joe! I appreciate you!
Date: 7/20/2024 12:13:00 AM
Hey Kim MY friend, i was happy to see your comment. Have fallen behind so much that it is too late to repair my folly, but as our work is our bread and butter i cannot let it suffer. Such a dilemma I am in and so stressed that i am not answering my good friends that I feel I'm useless on this site that I thought of leaving but the thought of leaving you all behind is awful and depressing. Your write is so touching and your clever wit is unsurpassed in some of your poems. Hugs Jenn.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2024 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jennifer! Don’t leave. Sometimes our seasons are busy. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/19/2024 8:17:00 PM
"still I hear your motherly voice in the wind, emphatically reap your snowdrop smile." This is a touching and beautiful poem. There is a trace of deep melancholy and longing over the loss of a loved one. May your mother's sweet love wrap you in the chills of winter. Your poem is so soulful and I can easily relate. All the Best in the contest, sweet Kim. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Valsa! I always appreciate your visits! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/19/2024 1:10:00 PM
You are so gifted, Kim....the is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, Kim....a fav definitely...it's so, so beautiful <3 xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2024 1:32:00 PM
Humbled by your praise. I thank you so much, Paige!
Date: 7/19/2024 12:42:00 PM
your soulful words move me no end, kim...summer is all life and here you are speaking of demise...beautiful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2024 1:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, my friend!
Date: 7/19/2024 7:56:00 AM
I sense the parting, the wake of absence, and a dream of wanting, a pleasant reading, Kim, Aloha, William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2024 8:41:00 AM
Aloha, William - always good to hear from you. Grief never loses its grip, we just learn to cope. Thank you xx
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