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When Summer Is Gone

I will be remembering our wishful walks on the silken strand waiting for the delicate dewdrops of dawn on our chestnut cheeks. I will be feeling your tender kisses in my windswept hair as we sail across the sea nowhere to go just letting the flow. And when the afternoon delight turn to tangerine twilight, I will be seeing your sacred silhouette on the luminescent light in the afterglow of dusk when summer is gone. 31 August 2020 COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE any form any theme Contest Judged: 9/1/2020 10:30:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand 1st place

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Date: 11/6/2020 6:34:00 PM
I am a huge fan of goodbye summertime poems. So romantic, .A fave. And a belated congrats on the win you got.
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Date: 9/2/2020 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a write filled with love. Oh!!! the romantic summers, how fast they did flee. Enjoy your wonderful win and day................
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Date: 9/1/2020 5:37:00 PM
So summery and romantic, J! Love the alliterative word pairs you carefully crafted, and the overall tone of love and quietude. Well done, and congratulations on your win ~ John
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Date: 9/1/2020 4:45:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, JCB. Janice
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Date: 8/30/2020 12:40:00 PM
Hello JCB Burl, it is sad when summer is gone. It means the cold weather is coming. So sad. Enjoy yur day my friend.
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Date: 8/30/2020 10:54:00 AM
All season come and go... lovely poem JCB..
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Date: 8/30/2020 9:52:00 AM
such beautiful romantic imagery - makes me want autumn to hurry up and arrive this is so lovely - into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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