Silent One Poet Rhyme

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When Souls Spark

come here my dear
sky is so clear
lets stay right here
keep our hearts near

i'll hold your hand
so strong we'll stand
i'll hold you tight
guard like a knight

gone is the rain
so has the pain
look at those eyes
there's no more cries

moon wipes your tears
clouds take your fears
look how stars charm
keep you from harm

my love lets dance
soul's in a trance
found love at last
my heart beats fast

soul feels a spark
lights up the dark
as our lips kiss
feels like pure bliss

when the morn comes
sun plays his drums
hear the birds sing
what joy they bring

at peace we lay
such a grand day
my mind feels tame
found my twin flame

Silent One
Simple Musing
19 January 2018

An experiment poem with four words on each line, all which are one syllable.

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Maria Feliciano July 18, 2018 at 9:54 PM I really like your style of writing. Your creativity is unique. I enjoyed reading your work. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for your lovely comments. Maria Feliciano July 18, 2018 at 9:56 PM Nice to meet you, silent one.

Darlene De Beaulieu February 7, 2018 at 1:00 PM Hello Silent One,I like this poem that you wrote. A very well done experiment poem with 4 word in each line. Good luck in the contest. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu February 7, 2018 at 6:18 PM Sometimes that happens to me, sometimes when I press my comment it does not show, then I comment on another poem. Then come back and comment on the poem that did not show the comment. Silent One February 7, 2018 at 1:03 PM You posted twice, it is my contest.

Darlene De Beaulieu February 7, 2018 at 12:42 PM Hello Silent One,I love this poem.It is as far as i am concerned a well done experiment poem. I like the way the wordsa flow and I like what it says.Good luck in the contest my friend. have a nice day. Silent One February 7, 2018 at 12:43 PM Thank you Darlene, have a lovely day..

Phyllis Babcock February 6, 2018 at 8:19 PM Yes the twin flame the other part of you and the emotions it brings. Well written. love phyl Silent One February 7, 2018 at 12:43 PM Thank you Phyllis..

Anisha Dutta January 30, 2018 at 9:54 AM So nice. So cute. So sweet. I think this is too simple compared to your last toughest contest. Blessing.. Silent One February 7, 2018 at 1:15 PM Thank you Anisha..

Beautiful Scars January 30, 2018 at 5:45 AM great example for the contest! this will be quite a challenge! -luloooo Silent One February 7, 2018 at 1:15 PM Thank you Lulloo..

Constance La France January 29, 2018 at 8:24 PM Silent, really lovely and a great example for your contest and I love the music too!

Agnes Krampe January 29, 2018 at 3:48 PM This form is going to be quite a challenge. Thanks for the great prompt :)

FJ Thomas January 29, 2018 at 3:06 PM Oh my goodness! A challenge I must try! Wonderfully done!

Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2018 at 10:16 PM Congrats on POTD! Silent One January 24, 2018 at 9:12 AM Thank you...

Gary Bateman January 22, 2018 at 6:39 PM Hello Silent!! Congratulations on the POTD honor for this selection!! An extraordinary rhyme here beautifully articulated. A very interesting structure indeed for this theme -- and you've rendered it very well. A FAVE TOO!! Best Wishes, Gary Silent One January 23, 2018 at 2:34 PM Thank you Gary..

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 22, 2018 at 12:15 PM Cool sparkling rhymes, SO. Kudos on POTD. Just another poetic beach bum word surfing trophy, eh. Passionate love poem of exotic beauty. Love and joy always. Silent One January 22, 2018 at 3:53 PM Thanks Freddie..

Mike Gentile January 22, 2018 at 9:28 AM And...Congrats on POTD, So well deserved!1 Silent One January 22, 2018 at 3:53 PM Thank you Mike..

Susan Ashley January 21, 2018 at 9:26 PM Your poetic prowess know no bounds Silent One. Tender emotions so lovingly expressed, stirring and sensual (even with your word and syllable restrictions). Well done! Congratulations on your well deserve POTD honors. Warmest wishes ~Susan Silent One January 22, 2018 at 3:54 PM Thank you Susan, this is just a simple poem and I was surprised it got POTD..

Ravindra K Kapoor January 21, 2018 at 9:22 PM What a beauty you have weaved in this sweet little romantic write dear friend Silent One. It’s a great write in which Nature too participates with every sentiments and feelings of yours like an inspiring thought with a very well deserving win. Congratulations df it was a pleasure to read such a beauty after a long long time. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra K Kapoor Silent One January 22, 2018 at 3:54 PM Thank you Ravindra..

Joseph May January 21, 2018 at 7:54 PM Congrats on POTD Silent One Silent One January 22, 2018 at 3:55 PM Thank you Jo..

Sandra Haight January 21, 2018 at 5:10 PM Beautiful romantic sentiments expressed in diameter with couplet rhymes, Silent One. Congrats on your Poem Of The Day honor! Sandra Silent One January 22, 2018 at 3:55 PM Thank you Sandra..

Constance La France January 21, 2018 at 4:45 PM Silent, congratulations on POTD with your amazing simple musings ! Silent One January 22, 2018 at 3:55 PM Thank you BW..

Marilyn Williams January 21, 2018 at 3:29 PM Most moving and sensual. I love it. Thanks for sharing. It's a ten. Marilyn Silent One January 22, 2018 at 3:56 PM Thank you Marilyn..

Eve Roper January 21, 2018 at 12:06 PM Congratulations on POTD... Hugs Eve~`* Silent One January 21, 2018 at 2:13 PM Thank you..

Keith O.J. Hunt January 21, 2018 at 11:02 AM Love your poetic loom Silent, the heart wins the day, congrats on POTD;-) Silent One January 21, 2018 at 2:13 PM Thank you..

Charlie Smith January 21, 2018 at 10:46 AM Spun well with such few words, congratulations for POTD honors... Silent One January 21, 2018 at 2:16 PM Thank you..

Connie Marcum Wong January 21, 2018 at 10:30 AM Congratulations on having this insightful poem honored with POTD Silent! : ) Silent One January 21, 2018 at 2:16 PM Thank you..

Sunlite Wanter January 21, 2018 at 9:54 AM Real poetry, just beautiful. Congratulations ten times over! Silent One January 21, 2018 at 2:28 PM Thank you..

Donna Roberts January 21, 2018 at 8:38 AM Sweet complete Silent One January 21, 2018 at 2:28 PM Thanks..

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