Timothy Brumley Poet Pantoum

When School Is Finally Over

Love will come a calling
As autumn shades are turning
While auburn leaves are falling
The joys of love start burning
As autumn shades are turning
I'll end my college learning
The joys of love start burning
When time stops slowly crawling
I'll end my college learning
While auburn leaves are falling
When time stops slowly crawling
Love will come a calling.



                             Timothy I. Brumley

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Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2010 at 8:07 PM YEs, time stopped slowly crawling years ago for ME. That was a cool line here. NIce reading one of your poems. I haven't seen one recently! This was a great one to find! LUv,andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown August 9, 2010 at 8:53 AM Congratulations Tim on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Pantoum Me". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta August 8, 2010 at 6:24 PM Congrats on the HM win in my contest, Tim

Joyce Johnson August 8, 2010 at 2:02 PM Very nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Barbara Gorelick August 8, 2010 at 1:00 PM Congrats on your win..I really enjoyed this one. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 8, 2010 at 7:37 AM Congrats Timothy on your HM in the Pantoum Me contest with this amazing and entertaining write .. enjoy your special honor this happy Sunday with blessings and luv..

Poet Destroyer A August 2, 2010 at 9:14 AM **ring ring **The phone is ringing Tim, it is a long distance phone call from MEXICO!!! Will you please accept the charges? Hola Tim ¿cómo te va esta preciosa y maravillosa lunes. Tiny Tim, sí va a cambiar el tiempo y las hojas se vienen arrastrándose, pero me encanta, no sé. Disfrute de su auto de su error charla pequeña. El gran golpear ENCHILLADA

Dr.Ram Mehta August 2, 2010 at 4:18 AM Thanks, for supporting my contest, Timothy

James Marshall Goff August 1, 2010 at 6:35 PM perfect entry! Tim! jimbo

Poet Destroyer A August 1, 2010 at 6:34 PM a cute write,, good entry for the contest,, good luck..P.D.