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When Night Descends

When night descends, The heavens celebrate, The birth of stars Through the tossing trees, They send down their toothless smiles The Moon too smiles with glee, Like a pleased mother. The Earth in darkness, Looking at the illumined sky, Follows suit and lights up Street lamps open their eyes, Flooding the cobalt streets. Neon bulbs blink, From hidden homes Car lights dazzle, Like lightning Glow worms, like night sentries, Parade round with mini torches The roads ring with the sound Of returning feet Night prowlers come out To prey upon innocents Fairies roam round For their nightly gambols Day laborers Coil lazily to rest Letting their barbed distractions Melt slowly away The dead in their sepulchers Sleep dreamless! Among the muted murmurs, The cicadas’ sounds alone swell. This is the time for Life and strife To lay their heads pillowed For restful silence And serene sleep Under the blanket Of a dim lit night!
Placed First A Brian Strand Libre Verse Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/11/2022 9:47:00 PM
Vivid illustration of the nightly nature. "toothless smiles of heavens and stars; street lamps opening their eyes; mini torches of glowworms... Vivid illustration of the nightly nature. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2022 6:40:00 PM
"Fairies roam round, for their nightly gambols" lovely Valsa! Congrats!
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Date: 3/11/2022 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations, one your win, Valsa. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/9/2022 1:54:00 AM
Very well written, Verse. Dear Valsa, your imagery is stunningly beautiful. Best Regards
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Date: 3/8/2022 6:19:00 PM
Nicely pictured, Valsa. ~ Scared of the Dark
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Date: 3/8/2022 5:59:00 PM
Great imagery in your well written verse, Valsa.
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Date: 3/8/2022 10:26:00 AM
I still recall the nights when there were no airplanes to shatter the stillness of the night . . .Aloha!
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Date: 3/8/2022 10:12:00 AM
Great imagery of descending night Valsa. Hope your week is off to a flying start. Tom
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Date: 3/8/2022 8:39:00 AM
Personification and imagery impeccable! Blessings :)
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Date: 3/8/2022 8:37:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Valsa. With my cataracts (which they can't remove until May-June) the lights really dazzle! Lovely scene.
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Date: 3/8/2022 4:59:00 AM
Great images of the descending night, Valsa. I can't send a soup mail, so I will say it here (hate to see a lovely poem not make it due to technicalities), Check the rules of the contest again my friend--ten line limit.
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2022 8:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay for alerting me to read the instructions carefully ! I was quite careless ! Glad you enjoyed the poem. I have cancelled my entry !
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/8/2022 5:18:00 AM
Oh, good for you! - I was returning to make the same observation after not seeing soup mail enabled - it is a lovely poem, and I wouldn't change a word, just a different contest.
Date: 3/8/2022 4:40:00 AM
This is really nice: Glow worms, like night sentries, Parade round with mini torches
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Valsa George
Date: 3/8/2022 8:22:00 AM
Thank you again Jeff for bringing this to my notice. I have cancelled my entry ! Thanks also for your kind comment !

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