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Feb. 2 .2025
Write On Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Karen Jones

 

When starlings were swimming in the azure lake, When bats and owls began their nocturnal ride, When all the Earth under a dark blanket lay, And man and beast into sweet repose retired, My Muse, like a sweet temptress, came to me To set this captive free, to give free rein to my fancy. She sang into my ears the lovely strains Of a placid melody, bathing me in sheer delight Creating in me a passion too intense To articulate my disjointed thoughts Into vibrant melodies of beauty and love. Soon fireflies of thoughts came flitting, Like bees around a looted honey comb. In a butterfly net, I trapped them all. They clustered together in a clumsy heap, Making my darkened zone bright With little arcs of shimmering light. I placed them carefully in an ordered strain, Word after word, in meaningful sequence, Fashioning them into a beautiful symphony, Arousing in me mystical spells of joy. When your Muse comes knocking at your door, Delay her not, but let her in And go for a merry ride with her Into some sleepy glades where silence resides. There, let her magic wand kiss and caress you From head to foot and all over, Awakening your fancy from deep slumber, Parading before you, scenes of beauty and wonder, That, songs of passion are born from you Gushing forth in streams of honeyed dew. So, write on....!

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Date: 3/16/2025 6:48:00 PM
Beautifully written and extremely inspirational. Thanks for sharing your soup. Very tasty.
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Date: 3/8/2025 1:42:00 AM
Beautiful Valsa ! Muses are so special, aren’t they ! They love us like the Divine. I enjoyed all the insect details. It illustrates an eye for the micro which has so much to teach. I liked mystical spells of joy. Gushing forth in streams of honeyed dew...a very fairy-like poem invoking your embraces with a muse in a little forest. Enjoyed this read today. Lifted my spirits.
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Date: 2/21/2025 4:10:00 PM
Gorgeous poetry and I see it has a well deserved trophy. I was thinking maybe it was for fireflies but then I saw it was an older poem. Anyway , big congrats in the contest it was entered in.
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Date: 2/5/2025 4:39:00 PM
Beautiful and captivating, What a wonderful poem put together, so thankful and blessed to have this opportunity to enjoy your writings in giving and sharing with us all much wisdom and knowledge: )
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Date: 2/3/2025 12:29:00 PM
Dear, Valsa, I miss you and your astounding creations. This is a beautifully woven ode to the Muse and her tender, transformative power. "When your Muse comes knocking at your door, Delay her not, but let her in And go for a merry ride with her Into some sleepy glades where silence resides." Your lines feel like a dance—soft yet purposeful, leading to that crescendo where passion births art. Truly, this poem is a melody of its own, Stunning work! Congratulations on your trophy. I'm back now.
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Date: 2/3/2025 10:36:00 AM
Great poem. Nice to see you winning the trophy.
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Date: 2/3/2025 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I see it got a trophy. So good writing. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 2/3/2025 5:14:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I thought how your poem carries a regal grace, yet pulses with raw emotion. Just like a gentle tide that conceals an ocean’s depth. Every line seems to knitting sorrow and resilience into something truly luminous. Absolutely breathtaking! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:34:00 PM
Welcome back sweet valsa, i hope you had a wonderful break and i can see you have been inspired! What i absolutely love about this poem is the seamless flow of your lines and how you've expressed in such ease with great use of adjectives and wordplay! And that ending is so cool and clever! I love that! Im inspired to write on as i read this! I can see why its a trophy winner! Congratulations, well deserved! A favr for me! Sending you light today and always
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Date: 2/2/2025 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win dear poet friend. Beautiful muse- who comes knocking- 'to be trapped in butterfly net' lovely. Cheers.
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Date: 2/2/2025 2:09:00 PM
"Soon fireflies of thoughts came flitting, Like bees around a looted honey comb. In a butterfly net, I trapped them all." -- Wonderful imagery. Love it. "I placed them carefully in an ordered strain, Word after word, in meaningful sequence, Fashioning them into a beautiful symphony," -- Outstanding poetry. Welcome back!
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Date: 2/2/2025 1:19:00 PM
Valsa thank you for your amazing entry in my contest! You are the top winner! Your imagination was engaging and vivid! I love every single line and how beautifully you put this together! You used nature and language to birth ideas in readers head which is very infectious and inspiring! Enjoyed reading and will read anytime I need inspiration!
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/2/2025 10:00:00 PM
You deserve that trophy and I really do enjoy rereading your poem!
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Valsa George
Date: 2/2/2025 7:32:00 PM
What a thrilling surprise that greeted me this morning. Never expected that I would win a trophy, though had hoped that I would get some placement. Thanks a lot dear Karen for this great honor and for 'faving' my poem.
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/2/2025 1:21:00 PM
A fav from me!
Date: 2/2/2025 11:35:00 AM
Begins dreamlike…doesn’t the muse often show up that way?! Nice one, Valsa!
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Date: 2/2/2025 9:23:00 AM
The magic wand of your muse has taken my soul to where you are in a so wondrous ride following the melody of your enchanting words and the captivating images of your free fancy.. Dear Valsa, you have gone beyond the spell of your muse! becoming yourself a Muse so entranced oozing a spontaneous Beauty of words, aura and imagination! A true treat to read your wonderful poetry! So much enjoyed the poetic ride! Stay always blessed with the gift of wonder. God bless you. Love and hugs.
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