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When Love Is Not

starving for your attention my vision becomes a blur you send me into another dimension where I'll never find a cure wanting intimacy and a true lover an everlasting power, but now i know it's your cover and our love is sour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/16/2011 11:01:00 AM
Karen I can so identify with this piece of yours.. It is difficult but when one realize it is time to move on things does get better.. Enjoyed this one tonight :)
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Date: 3/11/2011 6:31:00 AM
You have done perfect rhyming in this write. You may name it rhyming poem. Yes, really lovely rhymes on love
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