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When Love Hits Rock Bottom

Confession turned to confusion Words turned to wounds Friends to fiends, Sheep to wolves, doves to ravens When love hits rock bottom Hugs turned to hurt Pain to my ones gain Fame to shame, Sheep to wolves, doves to ravens When love hits rock bottom When merry is spelt with an I Instead of a, for all When us vanishes to I Light into darkness it’s like When love hits rock bottom Wonder where the pain Went when I fell in love, Why my vision got blur. Now I don’t just feel but see it, When love hits rock bottom. Cupid I won’t blame Stupid I is to put to shame. A lame heart is what I will take back to my hut When love hits rock bottom

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Date: 2/24/2016 9:44:00 PM
Tsumah, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:02:00 PM
T NYAE, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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