When Love Frees You

I cross the darkest bridge of emotion
A sparrow small fighting a lonely storm
Salt filled traces fall wet in slow motion
To circle my sadness after they form
And lay on the long arch spanned to your eyes
They carry me far from my dim-lit cell
Where I was shackled to my sad disguise
Till' your wondrous love released me from hell
This gift, this treasure, this heartbeat we found
Gives strength to our bridge, so love can begin
And allow this arch to be sacred ground
When the death of sadness frees love again
When my years of pain burned out of control
You built a bridge to the well of my soul


5/13/20
contest Bridge Over Troubled Waters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 5/21/2020 2:08:00 PM
Oh my, your beautiful touching words have me in tears Frederic. I can’t express how much I love this poem other than to FAVE it! This contest brought out the very best in your talent as a poet! Congratulations on your very deserving first placement! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/21/2020 12:07:00 AM
"And allow this arch to be sacred ground"...beautiful imagery throughout the sonnet. Congratulations on your win Frederic :)
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Date: 5/20/2020 10:31:00 PM
So many descriptive images - creative and unique. Your last line echoes a reference to the "well of souls." I like the way you transition from despair to the saving aspect of your love to be as "sacred ground." Congratulations on your first place win Frederic.
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Date: 5/20/2020 5:48:00 PM
Descriptive blend of literal and figurative language in this great sonnet, Frerderic. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 5/20/2020 4:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win! I love “ Salt filled traces fall wet in slow motion To circle my sadness after they form” Well done!
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Date: 5/20/2020 4:25:00 PM
I loved your line "This gift, this treasure, this heartbeat we found". Very touching use of imagery in this love poem. Congratulations on your #1 placement, Frederic ~ John
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Date: 5/20/2020 3:49:00 PM
'Frederic, Congratulations on your excellent write. Your sparrow on the bridge was a powerful image of the storm you faced. David'
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Date: 5/20/2020 3:40:00 PM
This touched me deeply Frederic, it was exactly what I asked for. A worthy first place!
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Date: 5/16/2020 9:23:00 AM
Hello Frederic, A very beautiful and wondrously articulated sonnet!! Perfect through and through. Outstanding Work for sure on this sonnet. Your words melt into the reader's mind when they are read. What more could a poet ask for?? Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 5/15/2020 7:32:00 PM
Lovely, Frederic! It's so nice to see that you're still sharing your beautiful sonnets...xxx Rhonda
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Date: 5/15/2020 8:53:00 AM
Breathtaking beautiful!
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Date: 5/14/2020 10:12:00 PM
How romantic and sweet. This is signature you. Blessings and thanks for your visit
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