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Love is forever colder when it dies As it withers away to disappear When silence fills the void of stoic eyes And become misty, nothing is clear To be trapped in reasons of what went wrong And replay the time when everything changed When you find promise that didn't belong That causes your world to be rearranged When you reach the point of coldest despair Will you reveal its death frailties cost? To wallow in pity the pain you bear Or, firmly stand and rise despite the cost Love is eternal and yet is forgot Moments through time where we struggle a lot 9/3/17

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Date: 9/3/2017 12:38:00 PM
Nothing colder, when love is lost, well done Frederic...
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