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It echoes dull dawn past a long evening. Dusk is being thawed off like flowering. Your aegis bore the road to the doorway. A soft tune for a crucial sweep of sway, High, grim oaks form a tone of masterwork. All around, snow-cloaked raw act like a stork, Much frost lingers baffled to the twigs' arms. Glancing all around, watching over barns! Like a butterfly fetching my glamour, Your love drew my wings, a kiss of amour. Like a child was wiping my tears, says no. Your grin, an easing-up pole for rainbow, All, out of this apex, to the prime peak From ice orb to the vast sky, it's all leak. But clear than a gismo, that hits my sight! Dazzling had to mix magic and heal plight. Everything you own is what you have loved. Get relieved of your ego and think roved. Nothing huge was ever done without zeal. Love, be grateful and assist others heal.
Written: February 08, 2022 Selected as POTD

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Date: 5/10/2022 11:14:00 AM
Hello Lasaad, this is a beautifully done poem. I enjoyec to read it. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 5/9/2022 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day Sotto, the poem is exquisitely beautiful,“ It echoes dull dawn past a long evening. Dusk is being thawed off like flowering.” Lovely! ~ Belle
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Date: 2/13/2022 8:38:00 AM
Sorry, I missed seeing this poem as POTD. So happy for you for this deserving win . Congratulations sweet friend, Lasaad !
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Date: 2/11/2022 7:38:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Lasaad!
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Date: 2/11/2022 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations for this great POTD Lasaad. Enjoyed Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 2/10/2022 7:03:00 PM
This is beautiful, magical and uplifting, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations Lasaad, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/10/2022 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem honored for POTD Lasaad! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/10/2022 2:58:00 PM
Beautifully penned Lasaad, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/10/2022 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! Breathtaking! "Dazzling had to mix magic and heal plight"....Stunning! A beautiful and well deserved POTD! :)Paulette
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Date: 2/10/2022 9:30:00 AM
Very soulful poem, Lasaad. Nice rhythm and easy to read. I especially liked the last verse. We must overcome the self-love of ego to be able to: "Love, be grateful and assist others heal." Thank you for sharing your thoughts through poetry. Bill Congratulation on POTD!
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Date: 2/10/2022 8:42:00 AM
A beautiful and uplifting poem, Lasaad, many congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/10/2022 8:41:00 AM
Lasaad, a lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance
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Date: 2/10/2022 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations for this excellent POTD. ! Well done Lasaad. Enjoy :)
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Date: 2/10/2022 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "When Light Shines" is bright/beautiful. Love your ending lines, "Nothing huge was ever done without zeal. Love, be grateful and assist others heal." Have a blessed day.....................
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Date: 2/10/2022 5:26:00 AM
Congrats for your POTD.
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Date: 2/10/2022 5:17:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Lasaad. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 2/10/2022 4:58:00 AM
Stunning imagery, Lasaad, congratulations on POTD,
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Date: 2/10/2022 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations Lasaad on a towering POTD, wonderful imagery and language topped off with excellent rhyme, fully deserved, cheers David
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Date: 2/10/2022 1:52:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 2/10/2022 1:23:00 AM
Superb write, Lasaad, congrats on POTD!
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Date: 2/10/2022 12:38:00 AM
"Get relieved of your ego and think roved" - Great need of the day. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/10/2022 12:38:00 AM
Back with congratulations Lasaad on the well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 2/9/2022 8:24:00 AM
Stunning imagery Lasaad, we have so much to be grateful for in life.. Tom
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Date: 2/9/2022 2:45:00 AM
What a marvelous poem, my friend, Lasaad! Poetic dawn! Much enjoyed. A Fave.
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Date: 2/8/2022 7:45:00 PM
You have painted the dusk in its varying hues with the oaks and their twigs snow laden and the ground covered in snow looking like a stork. A magical scene with some salient pieces of advice at the end.
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