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When Light Shines

It echoes dull dawn past a long evening. Dusk is being thawed off like flowering. Your aegis bore the road to the doorway. A soft tune for a crucial sweep of sway, High, grim oaks form a tone of masterwork. All around, snow-cloaked raw act like a stork, Much frost lingers baffled to the twigs' arms. Glancing all around, watching over barns! Like a butterfly fetching my glamour, Your love drew my wings, a kiss of amour. Like a child was wiping my tears, says no. Your grin, an easing-up pole for rainbow, All, out of this apex, to the prime peak From ice orb to the vast sky, it's all leak. But clear than a gismo, that hits my sight! Dazzling had to mix magic and heal plight. Everything you own is what you have loved. Get relieved of your ego and think roved. Nothing huge was ever done without zeal. Love, be grateful and assist others heal.
Written: February 08, 2022 Selected as POTD
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 11:14 AM
Hello Lasaad, this is a beautifully done poem. I enjoyec to read it. Enjoy your day my friend.
Edmonds  Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day Sotto, the poem is exquisitely beautiful,“ It echoes dull dawn past a long evening. Dusk is being thawed off like flowering.” Lovely! ~ Belle
George Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Sorry, I missed seeing this poem as POTD. So happy for you for this deserving win . Congratulations sweet friend, Lasaad !
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 7:38 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Lasaad!
Brown Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations for this great POTD Lasaad. Enjoyed Blessings ~ Debra
Nicole Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 7:03 PM
This is beautiful, magical and uplifting, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations Lasaad, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 3:25 PM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem honored for POTD Lasaad! Blessings xxoo
Kitchin Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 2:58 PM
Beautifully penned Lasaad, congratulations on POTD!
Calasibetta Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! Breathtaking! "Dazzling had to mix magic and heal plight"....Stunning! A beautiful and well deserved POTD! :)Paulette
Baker Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 9:30 AM
Very soulful poem, Lasaad. Nice rhythm and easy to read. I especially liked the last verse. We must overcome the self-love of ego to be able to: "Love, be grateful and assist others heal." Thank you for sharing your thoughts through poetry. Bill Congratulation on POTD!
Faulkner Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 8:42 AM
A beautiful and uplifting poem, Lasaad, many congratulations on POTD!
La France Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Lasaad, a lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance
Sands Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations for this excellent POTD. ! Well done Lasaad. Enjoy :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "When Light Shines" is bright/beautiful. Love your ending lines, "Nothing huge was ever done without zeal. Love, be grateful and assist others heal." Have a blessed day.....................
Buhagiar Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 5:26 AM
Congrats for your POTD.
Pandit Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 5:17 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Lasaad. Enjoy your day.
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 4:58 AM
Stunning imagery, Lasaad, congratulations on POTD,
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations Lasaad on a towering POTD, wonderful imagery and language topped off with excellent rhyme, fully deserved, cheers David
May Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 1:52 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
Seeker Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 1:23 AM
Superb write, Lasaad, congrats on POTD!
Cunningham Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 12:38 AM
Back with congratulations Lasaad on the well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
Alex Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 12:38 AM
"Get relieved of your ego and think roved" - Great need of the day. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Cunningham Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Stunning imagery Lasaad, we have so much to be grateful for in life.. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 2:45 AM
What a marvelous poem, my friend, Lasaad! Poetic dawn! Much enjoyed. A Fave.
George Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 7:45 PM
You have painted the dusk in its varying hues with the oaks and their twigs snow laden and the ground covered in snow looking like a stork. A magical scene with some salient pieces of advice at the end.
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