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When Life Kissed Me Again

When life kissed me again Like a leaf of Autumn, detached, afloat in air, With my love lost, drowning deep in despair, Water filling the lungs, losing myself to life, Soul rested tranquil, was an end to all strife. Opened the door again, a ray of light reached, as he sent sparks to my sinking heart beats, Wiped tears of grief, rolling down my cheeks, Now a singing flute, I behold his breaths to peaks. Written March 29th, 2016 For contest by Broken wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/21/2016 9:13:00 PM
A very beautiful write, Dr. Upma... Yes there is always a chance that a closed door can open once again... Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 4/6/2016 11:15:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your "When A Door Closes WIN." Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/5/2016 12:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem on resurrection of life with the life of heart. Well done. Congrats on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/5/2016 8:23:00 AM
Hi Dr. Upma, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Another excellent write from your pen. Such a beautifully gentle peace. Well deserving of a seven rating my friend. Hugs....Mike.
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Date: 4/5/2016 7:36:00 AM
This is lovely, Upma. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr.Upma...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 4/4/2016 7:40:00 PM
Dr. Upma, congratulations on your fine win for your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/4/2016 9:02:00 AM
Your works are truly heartfelt Dr. Upma! I enjoyed this one! Congratulations and a 7 for you! :) _HANS
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:41:00 AM
What a beautifully written poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/4/2016 3:18:00 AM
Greetings Dr. Upma. Congrats for your placement with this wonderful write!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/4/2016 12:47:00 AM
Beautifully penned Dr Sharma many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2016 7:22:00 PM
Dr. Upma, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/29/2016 8:43:00 PM
Nicely Done Upma
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Date: 3/29/2016 12:26:00 PM
Very well done Upma...I like how you opened the door
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Date: 3/29/2016 9:41:00 AM
I like contrast of down then up feelings.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/29/2016 10:27:00 AM
Thank you dear

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