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When Is Good Morning Lucky Day Coming ?

How can i survive when i can barely peak And so i cried and cried for weeks The bitter part it's yet unspoken But yes the reality had to be taken Angel took away my sorrow And made me believe in a better tomorrow In the genesis i was really hopeless But i began to flow with nature and so i got happiness I know in life there comes a time weeping And nevertheless the time for wishing And so the sun went down softly Another night is here again, i breathe slowly My art is full of bitter compassion Now how do i tell of my dream-my vision

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/6/2016 2:48:00 PM
Garnua, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 6:50:00 PM
GRNUA, enjoyed reading your poem... HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:56:00 AM
Hello Garnua: WOW!!! What an emotional and wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Peace: Sheol
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Date: 2/26/2010 4:47:00 PM
I'm so glad an "Angel" took away your sorrow, Garnua. You have a gift for words so you should have no trouble sharing your "dream" with us. Beautiful writing! Welcome to Poetry Soup. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/22/2010 4:56:00 PM
Very touching words! Good poem.
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Date: 2/22/2010 5:14:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Garnua. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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