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When I Was A Young'un

A lazy old bugger I've now become After a lifetime of living, I now sit on my bum Unable to do Things I once used to Now I dream of those years when I was a young 'un

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/9/2016 12:15:00 PM
Ummm... There's a lot of young ones doing the same thing... now-a-days... Except my boys of course... Casey is at Fort Hood (Back from S. Korea) and Joey just graduated from Nursing school... He took his liscencing test yesterday... We're waiting for the results and he has a job lined up already... It, too, waiting for the results...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/9/2016 2:46:00 PM
Three cheers for Casey and go Joey go!!! Hugs xxx
Date: 5/31/2016 12:40:00 PM
I think you've earned that privilege, after all of these years. :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/31/2016 4:01:00 PM
Hey Mr. Drake... I have enjoyed your visits recently! Hope things are zinging along for you, my good buddy!!!
Date: 5/31/2016 11:25:00 AM
Maybe you're just more relaxed. No worries.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/31/2016 3:57:00 PM
THAT is for sure!!!!!!!! LOL
Date: 5/31/2016 8:58:00 AM
Are you saying your get up and go has gone up and went? Cute poem Jack!:)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/31/2016 9:02:00 AM
LOL You got it!!!! Love and hugs, Jack xxx