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When I fell in love with you.

When I fell in love with you.
Your smell was intoxicating.
Your hair in a tidy mess.
Your smile lit up the room.
Your smell was intoxicating.
Your voice was invigorating.
Your smile lit up the room.
Your voice was invigorating.
Your eye twinkled like the stars at night.
Your hair in a tidy mess.
Your eyes twinkled liked the stars at night.
When I fell in love with you.

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Date: 8/12/2010 4:03:00 PM
thanks everyone
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:54:00 AM
Nice job...Jimmy
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Date: 8/3/2010 10:18:00 PM
What a pleasure to read your poems. Keep em coming. I look forward to reading more. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 8/3/2010 3:39:00 PM
Thank you. Glad you liked it. and yes Anothony is it quite funny.
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Date: 8/3/2010 5:27:00 AM
Have to agree with AW, enjoyed reading your work today Sierra, tc ~ Wilma
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Date: 8/3/2010 4:08:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today! Take care!
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Date: 8/3/2010 3:08:00 AM
Isn't it funny that when you fall in love you fall in love with the every part of the person. Nice write.
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