When I Fell In Love With You.

When I fell in love with you.
Your smell was intoxicating.
Your hair in a tidy mess.
Your smile lit up the room.
Your smell was intoxicating.
Your voice was invigorating.
Your smile lit up the room.
Your voice was invigorating.
Your eye twinkled like the stars at night.
Your hair in a tidy mess.
Your eyes twinkled liked the stars at night.
When I fell in love with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cowan Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 4:03 PM
thanks everyone
Anderson Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Nice job...Jimmy
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 10:18 PM
What a pleasure to read your poems. Keep em coming. I look forward to reading more. Have a great day! Scarlett
Cowan Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Thank you. Glad you liked it. and yes Anothony is it quite funny.
Neels Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 5:27 AM
Have to agree with AW, enjoyed reading your work today Sierra, tc ~ Wilma
Culverhouse Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 4:08 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today! Take care!
Nutter Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 3:08 AM
Isn't it funny that when you fall in love you fall in love with the every part of the person. Nice write.
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