When I Died


When I died a queen in ancient Egypt it was the custom,
           To entomb the powerful with all their earthly wealth;
On the walls of my tomb were paintings depicting my journey,
     The entrance to my vast tomb was sealed with a scared carving.

In hieroglyphs it warned of my magical and demonic powers,
           In pictures and symbols the writing told of my dark secret;
The seal of my tomb was to never be broken- the writing stated clearly,
     Tomb invaders could not understand the puzzle writing of hieroglyphs.

They broke the seal and entered my resting place with awe,
          Touching all my sacred things and filled their bags with gold;
Casting aside the sheets of papyrus on which my funeral text was written,
     My coffin was opened- it was silent in the tomb as light touched the walls.

The invaders did not respect the dead it seemed and I was angry,
          They were excited with rummaging and did not notice the air;
That changed with electricity and I rose a hologram of the queen I was,
     And with me came my beloved leopards who killed the invaders quickly.

We left my tomb- beautiful holograms of evil to exist again . . . 

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May 1, 2016

Poetry/Verse/When I Died
Copyright Protected, ID 784-551-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, Any Poem You Wrote This Year 2016,
sponsor, Skat

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 15, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations Broken, thanks for the entry. Skat
Roberts Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 7:00 PM
what a magical story you weave with this lovely piece dear Constance, Love it, congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 4:50 PM
wow, you took it to the dark side, Constance How did I ever miss this gem. BIG congrats on your win!! (how are you? Miss you today!)
Raven Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Hi Constance, another excellent write. Best wishes in the contest. A most creative write on the theme. Ancient Egypt, one of my favourite periods of ancient history. You have told your tale of the Hieroglyphs and Holograms and you have told it most creatively. This is a definite seven Constance and it goes into my faves.
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Mike thanks for visiting and for the nice comment and fav
Martin Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Interesting read, Constance. Enjpyed very much, Luck in contest! Have been keeping literary journal (not with the Soup). Sorry jhave not been around lately.
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Thomas nice to hear from you and thanks for the comment on my poem
Inman Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Scary story BW, mysterious and entertaining.
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:12 PM
James, thanks for the visit, well you know me and my muse, we are on fire ~
Nau Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 2:24 PM
I doubt very much that we have any less respect for the dead now! I heard someone say that, "we hoard our dead"! What an odd thought! I think we rather miss them. So, if nothing else, it's disrespect for our memories; all that we have of the person. Yet in 1000 year,s the Energy goes somewhere...so don't mess with it! Ha! Fun personification of the person, history, and situation! <3
La France Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 5:48 PM
Edlynn, thanks for visiting and the comment ~
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