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When I Died

When i died, hush bequeathed the Scrabble Board The once weighty tomes floated off cramped shelves Whilst married letters argued midst themselves Phonics quivered sans the vowel adored O' warm vowel with the prominent dot Disarrayed lost words bowed their heads and cried On that sonant solemn day when i died Shrouding the dot with a forget-me-not Ill-fated, O' How could i bear such strain Replaced without heart in a scrabble game From die to dye, opponents scored higher Of y's bold encroachment on i's domain And when i died in Craig, one must exclaim Replaced by a y, does it create Ire? Date: 11/04/23 I died poetry contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Date: 5/7/2023 9:22:00 AM
Nice control of words and stringing them in a fluent poem.
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W J Clarke
Date: 5/8/2023 6:01:00 PM
Thank you for reading and for your kind compliments Jay. Very much appreciated:-)
Date: 5/4/2023 10:26:00 AM
Congrats and "hygh" "fyves" WJ! Creatyve "delyght!" Congrats and hats off for this playful creation! A fav! Blessings!
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W J Clarke
Date: 5/5/2023 6:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Syr Sam. Your kynd appreciation and encouragement really does mean a lot to me. God Bless you:-)
Date: 5/3/2023 1:37:00 PM
This one was fun! The word play was outstanding. Congrats!!!
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W J Clarke
Date: 5/5/2023 6:18:00 AM
Thank you Mark. I consider this a great compliment from an outstanding laureate of sonnets:-)
Date: 5/3/2023 6:57:00 AM
Imaginative write WJ. Nicely done! Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 5/2/2023 7:31:00 PM
Dear W J, your sonnet is a wonderfully creative creation. I enjoyed your unique poetic expression and exceptional rhymes. Congratulations for your wonderful placement in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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W J Clarke
Date: 5/3/2023 3:41:00 AM
Thank you Susan. Really happy with my placement. Really chuffed to have my name listed amongst great poets like yourself on this occasion:-)
Date: 5/2/2023 7:24:00 PM
I've never been that good at Scrabble, maybe you could give me a lesson? Very clever, and congrats!
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W J Clarke
Date: 5/3/2023 3:36:00 AM
Thank you Michelle. Glad I was able to meet the challenge. I really must wipe the dust of the scrabble box sometime:-)
Date: 5/2/2023 6:47:00 PM
Quite a creative take, Clarke, congratulations on HM:)
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W J Clarke
Date: 5/3/2023 3:35:00 AM
Thank you Jo. I enjoyed the challenge of thinking outside the box:-)
Date: 4/12/2023 2:13:00 PM
Ha this is a winner in my books, love the word play, great poem :)
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W J Clarke
Date: 4/13/2023 12:33:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for your encouraging compliments Hat :-)
Date: 4/11/2023 3:58:00 PM
Perfectly played (plaid, pleighed, etc.) hmm… so many letters, so many options. Excellent writing WJ, and I do believe, Mr. Cornish will love this one.
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W J Clarke
Date: 4/13/2023 12:30:00 PM
Thank you for taking time to read my poem Mark. Your comments are very much appreciated. I enjoy trying to think outside the box and experiment with new ideas :-)

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