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When I Close My Eyes

When i close my eyes i see peace,in my mind,not war. when i close my eyes i see the hope and joy that could have been. when i close my eyes.i see love and unity between people of different raceses. when i close my eyes.i see myself flying above the mountains looking down, through the eyes of an Eagle. and as i am flying i can see the sea and iam still looking through the eyes of an Eagle.when i close my eyes.i see the stars above when i close my eyes i see children happy Not sad.or scared. i see them playing together not fighting one another.i see no war. why cant we all close our eyes and see peace and love and hope and joy?not hate.

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Date: 2/18/2011 11:44:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I know this is a late welcome but, I have had some very pressing matters going on. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:12:00 AM
thank you so much for your comments about my poem and i will have more to come.
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:04:00 PM
Good one..Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more post for us to enjoy..Sara
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:03:00 PM
Very creative write on when I close my eyes
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