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When Heaven Waits For You

When heaven is waiting at the feet of your soul longing to bless you with special gifts of love May Compassion clothe and Mercy follow for the path is narrow and the stars are few...

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Christina Bowring

Date: 12/1/2023 4:40:00 AM

This is so beautiful dear Rose. So much expressed within its divine lines. Thought provoking too. I especially love the first line - such a glorious thought and prospect. A real pleasure to read this from your golden, gifted pen. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles for a lovely weekend. Xx :):)

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/30/2023 10:50:00 PM

wonderfuln it tears me apart, the title has so many senses and directions, I adore the few stars, brilliant

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/1/2023 2:44:00 AM

God is the Merciful one that never abandons us Yann, and His compassion is boundless, we are the ones that need to realize that His love was a gift given to us to save us from ourselves, stay beautiful, strong and brave dear soul. Love xo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2023 5:52:00 PM

A pretty one infused with hope. A few stars properly placed will do just fine.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/30/2023 7:07:00 PM

thankyou for your kind visit Richard, glad you enjoyed reading. it

Ink Empress

Date: 11/30/2023 9:46:00 AM

Your words are always so special dear sweet rose. I love the lyrical cadence and depth of this, my fave line in this is “ May Compassion clothe and Mercy follow “! Short but profound poem. I see in your comments you are working on a story. Cant wait to read. Sending you light today and always

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/30/2023 7:05:00 PM

It is a Xmas Short story if every you want to get a copy of it, please email me and I will gladly send it, :)