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When Heaven Aligns

Soft the night's whispers stir her heart Fresh the air's fragrance paints her cheek Bright the stars glimmer in her eyes Shrill the loon's note in her cry Love's a fair maiden when Heaven aligns Fiercest of predators if portentous her signs September 04, 2020 Completely Your Choice (4) Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/7/2020 3:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Your pen was in love. A beautiful write. Enjoy your win..............

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/7/2020 7:08:00 PM

What a delightful comment about my 'pen being in love.' Thanks for making my pen's evening, and mine too, Paula! Pens and Paper, Gershon

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/6/2020 5:17:00 PM

Gershon, this is one of my favorites of yours, ever! congrats on your top win!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/6/2020 8:23:00 PM

Appreciated greatly, Jeanne! FAVES are always thrills and honors for me. Here's to wins and soft winds, Gershon

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/6/2020 4:55:00 PM

Beautiful - a well-deserved win! Linda

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/6/2020 8:22:00 PM

Thank you for noticing my placement, Linda! Really appreciate all of your support. :) Gershon

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/6/2020 4:22:00 PM

What a lovely win my friend! Hope all is well with you! Congrats!:)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/6/2020 8:22:00 PM

Well, as I live and breathe! So nice to see your avatar, and thank you for noticing my placement in the contest, Brenda. Peace and Serenity, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2020 3:02:00 PM

this is a sparkling gem of beauty, Gershon. Congrats on making the list!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/6/2020 8:20:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. And you're right. 'I' 'made' the list! --- barely, actually. lol... Seriously, always happy to make any of the p.s. lists, and thank you, my friend, for noticing. Wishes and Wishing Wells, Gershon