When He Can'T Sleep

He remembers his grandmother
sitting next to him on the couch during naptime;
his two-year-old body restless and jumpy.

She would yawn a tremendous open, lion’s mouth
yawn and shake her mane of hair that fell around
her shoulders . . . and he would wait for the roar that never 

came. Instead, her measured breath would flow out into 
the sigh of the breeze through the trees or the swell 
of the ocean - the earth’s inhalations, it seemed.

Years later in Iraq and Iran, as missiles whistled 
overhead, the roar of tankers and hard-scrabble 
footsteps loud in the night, he puts

himself to sleep 
with the memory 
of her breathing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/29/2017 6:02:00 PM
You took my breath away Annette with the tale Annette I found the ending of the poem quite comforting to think during the stress of war he reverted to happy time of his childhood to help him sleep:-) hugs Jan xx
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Annette Gagliardi
Date: 5/1/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thank you. It is meant to comfort.
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