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Eyelids pierced by splinters of light, I rub my eyes as I awake. Though my bedroll has kept me warm, I am hungry, and my bones ache. Belongings few; I fear their loss, for they are what keeps me alive. Yet, they don't get lighter with age; I may not thrive, but I survive. A pair of doves announce the sun, dispelling the shadows of night. And I start my day panhandling; while trying to keep out of sight. Suddenly, I hear a loud laugh; with a jeering edge to its pitch. And some teenagers come running; being homeless makes me their . As a barrage of fists let loose, pain radiates with each impact. My nose is broken and bleeding, but most of me is still intact. Wrong place to be; when hate erupts, for the anger of youth runs deep. And although time will help me heal, I have no more tears left to weep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/23/2018 10:13:00 PM
Being homeless is tragic. Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 4/7/2017 5:26:00 AM
This touches me deep, because it's something I know well, and can relate to. You've written about this with such compassion, I love that.
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Date: 4/7/2017 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Darren, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/6/2017 10:07:00 PM
Awesome, poignant and heart touching poem Emile! ~Che :)
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Date: 4/7/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Cheryl, your comments are appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/6/2017 9:27:00 PM
Expertly penned Emile, a 7 and a bidding good night xomo
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Date: 4/7/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, your comments are appreciated, Emile.
Date: 4/6/2017 6:33:00 PM
Please, please tell me this happened to someone else ... though I almost hate saying that. The last line will haunt anyone with a conscience. I still preach about food: give up sugar, soda, get carrots or celery for snacks, - and for hurting brothers & sisters, maybe at a pantry or Salvation Army. Sugar is the sweetest devil!!!! Cast them out. Anyway, I am glad the hero will heal ... you are so prophetic about youth. Don;t ever quit praying for ourselves, & our youth.P T L
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Date: 4/6/2017 8:23:00 PM
Anil, your words found my heart and I am very thankful for your support, Emile.
Date: 4/6/2017 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Emile for bringing the plight of the homeless to light in this poignant story that is beautifully done. A heartfelt 7 :) Amitiés
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/6/2017 8:25:00 PM
Thanks Ann-Marie, for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, you have a compassionate heart. Emile.

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