When God Shows You the Light

I wrote this poetic monologue when I was seventeen years old. It was 
part of a play I wrote and directed. It was published in a theatre anthology 
used in High Schools as a text book. The writing is not polished but the intent 
is heartfelt and I believe still relevant. 

Young Man: So they wanted to send me to a special school,see. Cause I 
wasn't as smart as the other kids. It wasn't that I was retarded or nothin' like 
that. I was just slower at learning than they were and my english wasn't so 
hot either,I mean you know the way I talk.

Well I wasn't as smart as the other kids but I didn't want to go to no special 
school neither.No sir. So I begged the principle of the school to stay you 
know, "I got just as many thoughts as them other kids," I said "I just can't 
say them as well"

I begged alright... but he wasn't going to change his mind. And I didn't go to 
that special school, no sir. I had too much pride for that,no sir.

The kids and the teachers they used to make fun of me, they thought I didn't 
know but I knew. I use to go home crying and cursing god for not makin' me 
as smart as the other kids. But I don't cry no more and I don't curse god 
neither 'cause I found out something those kids and teachers may never find 
out.

Fancy words and fancy thoughts don't mean a thing 'cause those kids and 
teachers they've forgotten all about the feeling of love. 

Love... yeah that's about the fanciest word I know, and you know I wish I 
could teach those kids and teachers about love, but I was slow in learning 
about school they're slow in learning about love. 

Hey you know maybe we should send 'em to a special school!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 5:59 PM
Oh, my good friend. You are SO GOOD. To show this kind of love that you had for humanity even back in your youth. You are one who does not need that "special" school at ALL. that last line was a real clincher! Another Fave, and I am going to really miss you if you stop posting new poems. I would see more oldies but I have less than half an hour to catch up on comments now!!
Vaso Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Maurice this is wonderful, what can I say, when one reads this you get the message loud and clear. When you can convey your story like this, well this sir is polished!
Carrillo Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 7:41 AM
I agree, let's do it. Maybe they will educate themselves. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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