When Done

Take the morning and wring it
with calloused hands 
to see what drips
from the bloat of its beginnings,
a splash of light to give
gleam to a memory or mix
disparate things in metaphor 
for the ordinary to flash fresh
and be seen anew.

Or perform the rites
of distillation, the craft of making
what something in us craves
yet gives such meagre portion
just to dampen lips and no more,
whilst elsewhere in the shadows,
or loitering in between,
is the glint of promises 
our monuments can never keep.

Blunted tools butcher out
gross effigies of our gods
or fit stone hands to feel
the touch of flesh. The morning
yields its bounty to give comfort
and set something gentle 
within us free,
leaving mere phantoms
to inhabit the places
where we want to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Bailey Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Wow there is so much quality in this. I love the opening line, I think the first line has a huge impact on the rest of the poem. You nailed the aliteration in the first stanza especially. The rhyming ties it all together. It reminds me of my work in way. Brilliant work!
Willason Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 9:13 PM
Appreciate your comments Matthew and for taking the time to enter into its obvious complexity. Has quite a few layers and a distinct rythm pattern. Value your thoughtful views....shall read some of your work. Kind regards, Paul
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