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When An Alien Landed One Day

When an alien landed one day (having come to earth from a long way), he got out of his craft, and then some earthlings laughed at the things that he wanted to say. “There’s a leader,” he said, “and we’ve heard that he always must have the last word. All those twitters and such, yet he doesn’t know much! All the universe finds him absurd.” “Will you take me to him?” asked that creature. “On my planet, I am a great teacher. So they sent me to meet this great man of the Tweet, and his background I’m eager to feature. In a documentary I’ll show how this man through the door got his toe. How a person so blind came to lead his mankind all my galaxy’s dying to know. In addition, my purpose is to study up on your world, all of you, and the info that brings me to comprehend things that our own planet never should do.” Aug. 20, 2018 for the "Take Me To Your Leader" Contest of Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 9/7/2018 6:56:00 PM
I dug that a lot, put a much needed smile to me face lol i have the oddest feeling that trump will defy what so many republicfucks, dematards, moderatepunks and any other party affiliated nightmare persons trying to attain control of the states levers of power thats stretching its tentacles all over everything oppressing the people to keep secure these endless pyramid schemes that help solidify the rule of utter ignorance...s Sorry for rant enjoyed your poem immensely
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Date: 8/24/2018 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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Date: 8/22/2018 12:48:00 PM
Lovely poem Andrea hits home! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/22/2018 8:02:00 AM
He is king of the tweets alright..His favorite words are: 'There was no collusion'...Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 8/21/2018 2:01:00 PM
Who is wise … An alien who learns from all men, even you know who! Nice one, Andrea. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/21/2018 7:16:00 AM
Even the aliens heard the absurdity of our leader..you portrayed him well Andrea. The last stanza is quite telling--reflecting on us humans...didn't the humans elect that man?
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Date: 8/20/2018 11:37:00 PM
A superb quintuplet of limericks, Andrea...Jan will be jealous lol...love & limericks...^WW^
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Date: 8/20/2018 10:25:00 PM
Love your poem for the contest, Andrea.. luck
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Date: 8/20/2018 7:14:00 PM
Andrea.. Like a pearl necklace your perfect limerick string is going to attract a lot of attention because it’s simply amazing!
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Date: 8/20/2018 6:45:00 PM
a nice write (i've a couple of alien gray statues in my computer room : ) ...the end is a nice twilight zone twist.
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Date: 8/20/2018 5:50:00 PM
oh andrea, i hope this places at the very top of the winners' list! this is adorable and just perfect!!
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