Get Your Premium Membership

When a Verse Rolls

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Nette Onclaud.


Image result for candle and paper on a desk

When a verse rolls taking new flight Through ink's blot in gold of midnight; I am left pondering alone With just a quill glossy as stone-- That breaths lilt up with much delight. Hands on print once more write rewrite About charms, sorrows which incite Trembles... waiting for lines to groan When a verse rolls Till musings flower like dawn bright While tempo glides, soulfully right... A fate's calling not to disown The life of my poem...its tone Reaching others to be felt, known ; When a verse rolls. 7/22/2019 Rondeau Poetry Contest for charles messina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/6/2019 2:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your top win.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/4/2019 10:33:00 AM
Nette, back to say congrats on your top win. May your musing continue to flower in dawn's bright light my dear friend. Hugs, John
Login to Reply
Date: 8/4/2019 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win...tells the story of the poem so well!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/4/2019 9:16:00 AM
I totally understand why Charles has chosen you. It's amazing rondeau which describes the poetic process in all its depth. Gongrats on gold of gold.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/4/2019 7:57:00 AM
Wonderful write Nette. This flowed so well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Huggs // Charlie :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2019 3:48:00 PM
Your musings always flower and bloom with such beauty, Nette, and we always feel them. Best of luck in the contest my dear friend. Hugs, John
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2019 10:29:00 AM
You write so well Nette that all your verses roll as you constantly delight your readers! Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2019 9:31:00 AM
When it rolls it rocks the reader at attention...A good one
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2019 7:20:00 AM
When your verse rolls, it is always magic--a beautiful write, Nette..all the best.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2019 12:18:00 AM
I like how you orchestrated this piece. Hugs Rick.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2019 7:11:00 PM
You simply amaze me! This is way beautiful. Not only imagery but the joy of being a poet is wonderful. Best wishes, Panagiota
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs