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I love when a poem Takes me by surprise When it strikes a truth That takes my breath away When it makes me smile inside Or makes me shed a silent tear I love when a poem Whispers in my ear In any one of many ways When it dances up a storm And stirs up feelings lost Or sleeping under stars I love when a poem Bursts with originality Be it substance or expression Maybe whimsically inclined When it flows like honey Or sings an offbeat song Read on air by invitation ~ January 30, 2022 'POETS HARBOUR' AP: 3rd place 2020 posted on December 1, 2019

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Date: 12/14/2019 11:30:00 AM
I like that I can say with this poem me too.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/14/2019 11:36:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Robert.
Date: 12/5/2019 5:31:00 AM
I think you may have inadvertently won your own contest my friend.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/5/2019 8:25:00 AM
LOL Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment Caren. I hope you have written a fabulous poem for my contest.
Date: 12/2/2019 6:34:00 PM
Like a painting or a book that you are creating!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/2/2019 11:19:00 PM
Absolutely. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 12/2/2019 6:10:00 PM
Wonderful write. Great take on the creative process. Enjoyed immensely.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/2/2019 11:18:00 PM
Thanks, Frank, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 12/1/2019 9:08:00 PM
Me too.. Tenderly, lovingly expressed, O Poet. Beautifully penned, Line! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/2/2019 12:31:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/1/2019 1:20:00 PM
Hi Line, Poetry is a passion within us all - it is wonderful to be be able to share this with such awesome friends on soup. Hugs and blessings Line - a brilliant poem. Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/1/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/1/2019 10:50:00 AM
I love this one, so uplifting.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/1/2019 11:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/1/2019 10:46:00 AM
Love the comments Line! expresses so well appreciation of poetry!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/1/2019 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, James.
Date: 12/1/2019 9:14:00 AM
A poem always has these effects upon a poetic heart dearest, Line! Beautifully done!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/1/2019 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Demetrios. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/1/2019 8:07:00 AM
Gorgeous, gorgeous write and an instant FAV Panagiota xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/1/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely visit and most appreciated compliment, Panagiota.
Date: 12/1/2019 2:18:00 AM
Takes me by surprise...Whispers in my ear...Bursts with originality...So i loved this poem...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/1/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenish. Most appreciated.

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