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When a Man Loves a Woman and When a Woman Loves a Man

"When a Man Loves a Woman" Man’s feelings are complex when true love strikes. Impressing her becomes his forefront thought. He tries to learn of her dislikes and likes. Perfection is the dream that he has sought. When football games become his second quest, He wonders whether she would be his wife. And if she would years truly could be blessed. He prays that she will want to share her life. Confused at times when lust takes all control. Offending her he never wants to do. Forever love becomes his greatest goal. His thoughts of family begin to brew. Maturity knows that he must provide. When love is bright, his conscience will decide. “When a Woman Loves a Man” A woman loves a man with all her heart. Her views of him are biased and dreamlike. Imagination calls those two, “Sweetheart.” She hopes and dreams their feelings are alike. At first, she needs to show him that she’s chic. Her passion locked inside is set aflame. Sometimes she likes to be a bit mystique. She dreams that one day true love he’ll proclaim. At times she needs to show him that she’s smart. She wishes football games took second place. She’d rather watch with him than be apart. She understands he loves her sweet embrace. Their worthiness forever must be strong. Eternity together sings love’s song. 12/26/2016

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Date: 1/8/2017 3:44:00 PM
Beautifully written and I love the humour here Dane Ann. Many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/8/2017 6:09:00 PM
I'm grinning while I read your comment. LOL Yes, the humour was fun and tied the two sonnets together. Thank you for your congratulations. :) Hugs, Dane Ann
Date: 1/8/2017 8:07:00 AM
Coming back to you with congratulations :)
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/8/2017 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Darren. I appreciate your congratulations. :)
Date: 12/27/2016 9:52:00 AM
Well done, Dane Ann. : ) This was a hard challenge, but you brought out some universal truths. Cheers!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/27/2016 12:06:00 PM
Your comment is uplifting. It feels so good when someone understand the thought that goes into poetry. And who else could but another poet. Thank you.
Date: 12/26/2016 7:53:00 PM
Yes Dane Ann...darling & clever & funny!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/27/2016 1:55:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. It's nice to see your smiling face again. I love the comment. Big Smiles.
Date: 12/26/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thank you for sommenting on my poem, thus enabling me to find yours :) I love how you work the football into both sonnets!! Good luck in the contest.
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/27/2016 1:58:00 AM
Big Smiles. Thanks for visiting. I appreciate your comment about the football. :)

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