When the Night Comes - the Lanturne Style
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~When The Night Comes~
(Lanturne)
When
night comes
it's time to
relax sleep
too
The
chores are
nearly done
mark end of the
day
Night
creeps
in again
and it's time to
dream
The
moon shows
thru dark clouds
and stars brightly
shine.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2011
July.15.2016
~Author's Notes:
The "Lanturne" is a Japanese form or style shaped like a lantern.
Copyright © Dorian Petersen Potter | Year Posted 2016
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