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Hands holding in the summer wind Every time we hug our skin kiss Topping off every random whim Over suitable silence we couldn't miss Lingering thoughts within each others mind Dim even though the sun is out to blind Merrily dismissing, maybe and perhaps Eloping the certainties, for hopeful we catch Hushing inquisitively, he loosens his net... Even I could see the quivers are placed Lacing around him, his heart loud bets On the question that stays in his mouth...waste Visit me too, for I as well want Evening of quite with you in my arms Dying are wake so we could sound sleep Me and you together is our greatest keep Even though the first time, keep saying...no harms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/27/2010 2:41:00 PM
Nice and gente words...very romantic...had me at first line! irish
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Date: 3/23/2010 9:26:00 AM
Simply, beautiful!! Great write Jessica...I like this very much!! Goes to my favs. ...love, Audrey
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Date: 3/23/2010 6:58:00 AM
I so loved reading this piece Jessica. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 3:40:00 PM
Beautiful Acrostic Jessica, what a delightful read >> James
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Date: 3/22/2010 12:42:00 PM
I was at a meeting Friday and one of the questions asked had to do with hugging. I like your take on it.
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Date: 3/22/2010 10:54:00 AM
Oh, how lovely....I love the line "eloping the certainties"....what a eloquent way of speaking this tender poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/22/2010 10:08:00 AM
very romantic and sweet. I have enjoyed the read...
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Date: 3/22/2010 10:06:00 AM
Interesting romantic write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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