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Hands holding in the summer wind
Every time we hug our skin kiss

Topping off every random whim
Over suitable silence we couldn't miss
Lingering thoughts within each others mind
Dim even though the sun is out to blind 

Merrily dismissing, maybe and perhaps
Eloping the certainties, for hopeful we catch

Hushing inquisitively, he loosens his net...
Even I could see the quivers are placed

Lacing around him, his heart loud bets
On the question that stays in his mouth...waste
Visit me too, for I as well want
Evening of quite with you in my arms
Dying are wake so we could sound sleep

Me and you together is our greatest keep
Even though the first time, keep saying...no harms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/27/2010 2:41:00 PM
Nice and gente words...very romantic...had me at first line! irish
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Date: 3/23/2010 9:26:00 AM
Simply, beautiful!! Great write Jessica...I like this very much!! Goes to my favs. ...love, Audrey
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Date: 3/23/2010 6:58:00 AM
I so loved reading this piece Jessica. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 3:40:00 PM
Beautiful Acrostic Jessica, what a delightful read >> James
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Date: 3/22/2010 12:42:00 PM
I was at a meeting Friday and one of the questions asked had to do with hugging. I like your take on it.
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Date: 3/22/2010 10:54:00 AM
Oh, how lovely....I love the line "eloping the certainties"....what a eloquent way of speaking this tender poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/22/2010 10:08:00 AM
very romantic and sweet. I have enjoyed the read...
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Date: 3/22/2010 10:06:00 AM
Interesting romantic write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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