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Whatta Blast

Here's something for all to ponder today What if, as we take our last breath We are suddenly transported to another world And we wake in a land of no stress Where happiness reignes in every corner And wars are no longer waged Would our programmed brains even survive When we finally no longer age To be forever filled with happiness and joy Programmed to think only of love To greet every stranger with a cheery hello Consider friendship all else above Is this silly old duffer dreaming again But what a glorious dream to have To live in a world of true love and friendship It would definitely be a blast! © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/8/2015 9:58:00 PM

I love your dreamy poems like this... okay, I said the other was my favorite, now I'm thinking I like this one even more... thanks for sharing such beauty!!! I am amazed by your progress!! You write with vitality, hope and, of course, much love for humanity. Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/9/2015 7:40:00 AM

There is absolutely no one here on this great site that makes me feel like flying! You do it to me with every kind loving word!!! Till my very last breath, I will remember you and be so overjoyed to have known you, my dearest friend, Laura! Love, Jack xxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/1/2015 5:48:00 AM

Indeed, Jack. It does happen, as proven by near death experiences, there's heaven, even as it has already been told time and again by His Word. Would love to live there someday, where everyone only has kind thoughts about everyone. For now though, let's make do with what we have, simple friendship with everybody, just nice and easy. Good morning!

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/9/2015 7:35:00 AM

Methinks us poet guys could show the world a thing or two, eh!!! Hugs to you dear Kimmie! xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 5/31/2015 11:58:00 AM

It's called Heaven. At 17 I was electrocuted in an accident and really saw heaven... So much love and happiness. Unfortunately, I was told I had to go back. I had more work to do. The accident is why my heart pacemaker keeps my heart beating. My brain no longer talks to my heart to regulate it's beats... The accident was worth it to have seen heaven... even for a moment.

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/9/2015 7:32:00 AM

What a tragedy at such an early age! So you are living proof... won't be long for me! Huggsies, Jack xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/31/2015 7:05:00 AM

I want to live out that dream my friend.

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/31/2015 7:08:00 AM

Well if you've been a good fellow all your life, I'll see what I can do for you!!!