Get Your Premium Membership

What's Now Rather Than Then - Collaboration

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Lin Lane.


A Collaboration with Duke Beaufort The youthful memories I have did grate Upon my innermost self and I'd cry For my depressed spirit which longed to die And halt life tainted with anger and hate Yet now in a manic marvelous state Akin to alcohol’s euphoric high My heart's core renewed, can soar to the sky How this came to be, I’ll try to relate I trapped thorny issues behind a gate Forgiveness has become a great ally Love found every day gives reason to fly Like a balloon, unencumbered with weight While able to breathe and greet each sunrise Living and giving seem like the best prize **** Youth represents life with songs to be sung Laughing out loud when memories are made But you wept as your spirit became frayed Though now you're wiser than when you were young Having crossed the threshold of angst that clung See how clover's nectar can be arrayed Let your heart rejoice and not be afraid As delight comes from strands of pearls restrung The door's ajar—from the cage you've been sprung Take wing knowing happiness will not fade A heart's compassion will never abrade Where you go now—no place is too far-flung Revel in moonlight and dawn's painted skies An attitude change has opened your eyes Duke, Thanks for making our partnering on these Sonnets such fun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/29/2025 10:30:00 AM
Life can be a roller-coaster of a ride with highs and lows but we battle on, we get wiser and worry less.. Brilliant collaboration Lin and Duke. A fave. Tom
Login to Reply
Lane Avatar
Lin Lane
Date: 4/29/2025 12:58:00 PM
Much easier journey when there are more ups than downs. Those downs can be a train wreck. We've all had plenty of both. Thanks, Tom.
Date: 4/29/2025 10:06:00 AM
Such poetic brilliance in your collaboration that flows so well together and highlights so many aspect of life and growing, and time, how we learn so much through experience from forgiving not just others but ourselves for angst and more that now seems locked away as thorns that arent welcome. I really love the lines "I trapped thorny issues behind a gate" and "See how clover's nectar can be arrayed" creative and soulfully moving and very sincere write! And your rhymes are sublime! Fave this is. Pleasure reading you both today! Sending you light dear linnersz and duke! Well done on your flawless collab
Login to Reply
Lane Avatar
Lin Lane
Date: 4/29/2025 12:56:00 PM
Credit to Duke for the "thorny" line... long story. lol The other line you mentioned was a true collaboration. 7 words... needed to be edited by 2 people? Yes, and that was part of the fun. Thanks a bunch, Ink for your kudos.
Date: 4/29/2025 8:16:00 AM
- You can't sit and wait for "the big lightning strike" the older you get, the more you know what you want in a partner ... - "While able to breathe and greet each sunrise Living and giving seem like the best prize" - A lovely collaboration Lin & Duke :) - hugs
Login to Reply
Lane Avatar
Lin Lane
Date: 4/29/2025 9:06:00 AM
Hi, Anne-Lise. Looking at life from a new vantage point can have a positive influence, and getting by with a little help from our friends never hurts. Thanks a lot for your response. hugs

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry