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This day for you is just a special day A time to celebrate with closest friends My girl, I’ll try to find the words to say That on this day my happiness depends For on this day, in love you came to be My heart and soul I birthed into your form With your first breath life’s meaning came to me: A mother’s life your love had come to warm How can you know the blessing that you are? How can I make you see my depth of love? My universe will pale without your star On darkest nights it guides me from above You are the dearest dream that has come true You are my hope for better things to come My joy of living life, your birth made new You smile gives strength to live and not succumb Your heart is tender sweet and ever dear Your voice, it thrills the heart with tones of grace The room comes all aglow when you are near Your presence makes a home of any place God blessed our lives on this most special day: He gifted us a girl most precious, sweet One day you’ll have a child, for this I pray that as you've been, she’ll be love’s greatest treat! Eileen Manassian

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Date: 10/14/2016 1:10:00 PM
This is a poem just brimming with love, joy and delight for your most favorite person on this spinning rock we all share. I could literally feel the emotions through the screen as I read each line. Wonderful work Eileen! MC
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Date: 10/14/2016 1:09:00 PM
This is a poem just brimming with love, joy and delight for your most favorite person on this spinning rock we all share. I could literally feel the emotions through the screen as I read each line. Wonderful work Eileen! MC
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Date: 10/10/2016 5:07:00 PM
wow! this is beautifully heart touching, wow again, she's really beautiful, wow again. beautiful mothers are full of beautiful words to their beautiful children. best wishes to her and to you too, it's a happy day for you both.
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Date: 10/8/2016 12:02:00 AM
Children really are our dreams coming true. You dreamed up a beauty with your love.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/10/2016 12:05:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. This is truly a sweet comment. :) She is the light of my eyes.
Date: 10/6/2016 3:31:00 PM
When I read a dedication such as this, I can feel the love flowing right onto the page, so beautiful Eileen!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/17/2016 10:45:00 PM
She is who she is because of your paint brush, you guided her to be the woman she is, ask her and she will hug you and smile, I am sure of it! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/6/2016 10:23:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Arthur. My daughter is better stronger woman than I am. I just hope I can be around for her when she has children of her own. Thanks for the visit, dear.
Date: 10/6/2016 12:39:00 PM
a beautiful tribute to your daughter, eileen! i hope she has the happiest of birthdays...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/6/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thanks, dear Ilene. I know she spent the day with friends. I'm waiting to get all the details. :) Hugs
Date: 10/6/2016 12:35:00 PM
Great poem, Eileen. Happy Birthday Eileen's daughter. May you both share eternal love and happiness:)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/6/2016 10:42:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Daniel. Very kind and sweet of you. I hope that her future will be bright. I'm most worried about her finding a good life partner. If that goes through well...I can rest easy. :)
Date: 10/6/2016 11:19:00 AM
- Congratulations to the lovely young lady - Beautifully written, Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/6/2016 10:45:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine! I wish we could have celebrated together, but I'm sure her friends made her feel special on her special day. Hugs to you!
Date: 10/6/2016 10:37:00 AM
Such a beautiful dedication to your daughter. Happy Birthday wishes to her.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/6/2016 10:46:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Tim. You know how precious a daughter can be. Blessing to you and the kids.

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