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Whats All the Fuss About?

Do I know what all the fuss is about? When their long legs pass by in a flurry Languid some just slump and often passed out The smell of urine drenches their worry Look gazing eyes that pass me by, woo hoo! She’s perky! I really want to pursue! Grr! She’s gone; they must have turned down that way But my lady’s going elsewhere today My lady’s smart, clicks her way down the street And I accompany her at her feet! She calls me Fluffy, a name I despise Typical for a Poodle, no surprise! She picks me up and then kisses my snout “Oooh, peaches what is all the fuss about?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/1/2011 2:50:00 PM
Interesting poem. Good write.
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Date: 8/1/2011 2:48:00 PM
Interesting poem. god write.
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Date: 5/16/2010 4:03:00 AM
What a cute pet name, "Fluffy." She probably just sees you as a sweetie pie. Cute poem, David! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/13/2010 6:26:00 PM
that is so cool to not know what is going on. This reminds me of the movie the Shaggy Dog, why i have no idea. still smile on this one. Thanks for the good read,..p.d.
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:20:00 PM
Sweet and cute litlle poem David and animals poems are somehow the very best at times u need a lift... nice write tonight.. my friend.. posted some luv stuff for u with "Energies" and "The Break Up" .. u might like... to soothe the 'animal' within..haha..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:09:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, David....Jimmy
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Date: 5/13/2010 2:53:00 PM
A really delightful write, David! Thanks for sharing it...Is this for the contest? If it is I'm sure it will do well...cool....Peace, Audrey
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Date: 5/13/2010 12:37:00 PM
cutey pie poem, enjoyed today!! I like your comment made me smile!!
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Date: 5/13/2010 12:17:00 PM
Very inventive, David. Quite an enjoyable little read, and I'll see ya when I get back from my little trip this weekend!!Luv, andrea ps. guess what my captha reads? ENVY. hahaha
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Date: 5/13/2010 9:46:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your sonnet today, David! And thank you for your comments. I will continue so postin at least bilingual poems... All the best...Gert
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