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whatever real means

keep me guessing guided by lines connecting dots to approximate a reality that appears only as an outline

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Jaymee Thomas

Date: 11/19/2023 5:23:00 PM

This broke my heart a little, but in the best possible way.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/19/2023 11:00:00 PM

I thought it was a quick poem with no thought but actually it's really the condensed version of what I write about frequently. I only view this poem when I'm sufficiently armour plated. Having everything figured out but not feeling a sense of belonging is a tough one x

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/18/2023 2:32:00 PM

what a conundrum. Sometimes I truly don't know what's real, but real exists, right???? enjoyed the read! have a great evening, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/18/2023 10:50:00 PM

It's a fun idea to play with in poetry - every now and then it feels like time stops and we can look around and inspect things. Thanks for your comment

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/18/2023 12:34:00 AM

Real is what is. Anything else isn't.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/18/2023 12:53:00 AM

Or the reverse