What You Wish To Know

When you see me cry don't be afraid
Sometimes dads emotions overflow
I know you wonder what's going on
There are things we don't want you to know

Perhaps we're wrong to insulate you
As parents we try to do what's right
We wish for you only sunny skies
That's why we try to bathe you in light

The fact that you care it warms my heart
I will tell you what you wish to know
Today you've grown up you are a man
That's a process I don't wish to slow

Sometimes life it can throw us a curve
I lost my job a few days ago
So now I wonder what will I do
I am at my wits end I don't know

Please come to me I can use a hug
It will help me to feel it's okay
In the end I put my faith in God
With his help things will turn out okay

For F.J. Thomas's "To Heal a Heart" contest

Oops I went over by four lines so I know
I'll be disqualified. I still wanted you to read 
the poem you inspired.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Macfarlane Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:16 PM
I believe showing our kids our emotions, helps them to better expressed their own.....touching write Rick. Hugs
Bear Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 8:36 AM
;0)
Enriquez Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 9:19 PM
Dear Richard: Very nice write. Enjoyed this reading. Leon
Lamoureux Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 9:48 AM
Thanks Leon
Sirak Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 5:16 AM
What a lovely poem! We always want to shelter and protect our kids, though life has a way of getting through.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Hi Monterey, we sometimes forget they are made to weather the storm.
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 10:35 PM
Touching Richard..really....contest or not..inspiring....well done...
Lamoureux Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Donna, gorgeous eye.
Walker  Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:05 AM
Rick, this is very nicely written... Taking life for grant is not something to do. It is something to shoo :)s... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Thanks for your visit this morning Verlena.
Walker  Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:02 AM
Beautifully written Rick... Raising a child is a learning experience that you have pass on beautifully:)s... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:17 AM
I continue to learn even now that he is away at school. Sometimes our children are our teachers.
Horsch Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:58 AM
A very heartfelt poem Richard, I loved it my friend........Roger
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:15 AM
Good morning Roger, I think you will appreciate the poem I wrote this morning. I'm pleased you like this one.
Hamilton Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:03 AM
great pen Rick ty for your thoughts and prayers am feeling a lot better now gl in contest hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:10 AM
I'm glad you are feeling better.
Onclaud Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 10:30 PM
an endearing piece making me feel safe in a parent's embrace , rich... much enjoyed!.. huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:11 AM
Thanks Nette, Huggs back.
Michelle Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 8:37 PM
I hope it won't be disqualified! This is a beautiful poem, Richard. I'm sorry I have not stopped by in a long while. I thank you for all your kind comments on my poetry.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:13 AM
I hope not but either way I'm happy to have a poem. Thanks for stopping by.
Pettit Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:36 PM
The extra four lines make the poem better with more descriptiveness. Just correct the misspelled word in the third line of your second verse. The word "skys" is correctly spelled "skies". Everything else looks good.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:47 PM
Thanks Robert.
Dunn Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:33 PM
I'm glad you left in the over the mark four lines it's fine with me dude, I enjoyed your fine work on this poem it's a tribute to a hard working father and his daughter, very well done. cheri also thank you for your comment on my cougar poem. cheri
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:48 PM
No thanks required, it was my pleasure to read it.
Dunn Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:32 PM
I'm glad you left in the over the mark four lines it's fine with me dude, I enjoyed your fine work on this poem it's a tribute to a hard working father and his daughter, very well done. cheri also thank you for your comment on my cougar poem. cheri
Chircop Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Hi Richard..From the comments below it seems this happening is not present.I love the way you described the sheltering to your son..by not revealing your pain..but yes when are children become adults its like having a child and a bestfriend.I'm sure Our father in heaven was your shelter in such difficult times..and I do believe everything in life happens for a reason We d later be grateful : )Lovely poem.Btw..tnks for supporting becca s sun glasses blog: ) : ) Cool
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 2:18 PM
It was my pleasure, a fun idea. Thanks for this thoughtful comment.
Chircop Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 12:04 PM
Our ..I meant!! Oops sorry
Ellison Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 11:16 AM
So sorry for neglecting you, Rick! Being the dad of 5, I can certainly relate to this one! So very well expressed! However, if true about losing a job, with your knowledge of life and people, it shouldn't be long before that is recognized and you'll be on top of your game once again! Good luck, my friend!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Happy to be gainfully employed. 4 years to go till retirement.
Ellison Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 11:19 AM
Sorry, I didn't read through the comment to realize this is not current! I'm happy again!
Ryerson Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 6:47 AM
I will be happy to unofficially un-disqualify you Richard...I will speak to Flo personally if need be, I've got a little pull with her ya know...Good stuff my friend! - Tim
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Ha ha thanks, pull away my friend. It's good to have someone with some pull on the snide *lol*
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Richard. I hope this is not a true story about you in this moment. This scenario is a sad one and yet all one can do is hope with faith in God. great inspiration you got from her contest!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:33 AM
Thanks, I was trying to place myself within my emotions.
Bauer Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 3:29 PM
well written, richard! yes, we do try to shield our kids from things and sometimes it's not the right move. you've captured that very well here. ~ glad the story is fiction...
Lamoureux Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Me too, I had quit my job back in May of 2013 but it didn't bring me to tears.
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 2:03 PM
Fabulous poem Richard. It really struck a chord with me, We didn't tell our son about hubbies tests for cancer - didn't see right to worry him especially when the diagnosis took 2 years and it was major exam time for son. Love reading you poems Jan x
Lamoureux Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 3:41 PM
I can totally understand, I remember our conversation a while ago.
Smith Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Excellent poem on the subject Richard..Glad you are employed...Tim
Lamoureux Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Me as well, thanks.
Manassian Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 9:46 AM
This will do well, Richard. So full of strength. Yes, we can't slow the process. My daughter is my strength...She helps me in my down times to think positively. Is this fiction? I sure hope so...about the job part, anyway. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 9:54 AM
No worries I am employed, thanks for being concerned.
Callus Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Parent-offspring relationship, nicely tackled.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 9:54 AM
Thanks Paul.
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