What You Wish To Know

When you see me cry don't be afraid
Sometimes dads emotions overflow
I know you wonder what's going on
There are things we don't want you to know

Perhaps we're wrong to insulate you
As parents we try to do what's right
We wish for you only sunny skies
That's why we try to bathe you in light

The fact that you care it warms my heart
I will tell you what you wish to know
Today you've grown up you are a man
That's a process I don't wish to slow

Sometimes life it can throw us a curve
I lost my job a few days ago
So now I wonder what will I do
I am at my wits end I don't know

Please come to me I can use a hug
It will help me to feel it's okay
In the end I put my faith in God
With his help things will turn out okay

For F.J. Thomas's "To Heal a Heart" contest

Oops I went over by four lines so I know
I'll be disqualified. I still wanted you to read 
the poem you inspired.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/19/2014 8:16:00 PM
I believe showing our kids our emotions, helps them to better expressed their own.....touching write Rick. Hugs
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Date: 3/18/2014 8:36:00 AM
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Date: 3/17/2014 9:19:00 PM
Dear Richard: Very nice write. Enjoyed this reading. Leon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/18/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Leon
Date: 3/9/2014 5:16:00 AM
What a lovely poem! We always want to shelter and protect our kids, though life has a way of getting through.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2014 8:55:00 AM
Hi Monterey, we sometimes forget they are made to weather the storm.
Date: 3/8/2014 10:35:00 PM
Touching Richard..really....contest or not..inspiring....well done...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2014 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Donna, gorgeous eye.
Date: 3/7/2014 9:05:00 AM
Rick, this is very nicely written... Taking life for grant is not something to do. It is something to shoo :)s... Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 9:18:00 AM
Thanks for your visit this morning Verlena.
Date: 3/7/2014 9:02:00 AM
Beautifully written Rick... Raising a child is a learning experience that you have pass on beautifully:)s... Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 9:17:00 AM
I continue to learn even now that he is away at school. Sometimes our children are our teachers.
Date: 3/7/2014 8:58:00 AM
A very heartfelt poem Richard, I loved it my friend........Roger
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 9:15:00 AM
Good morning Roger, I think you will appreciate the poem I wrote this morning. I'm pleased you like this one.
Date: 3/7/2014 8:03:00 AM
great pen Rick ty for your thoughts and prayers am feeling a lot better now gl in contest hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 8:10:00 AM
I'm glad you are feeling better.
Date: 3/6/2014 10:30:00 PM
an endearing piece making me feel safe in a parent's embrace , rich... much enjoyed!.. huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Nette, Huggs back.
Date: 3/6/2014 8:37:00 PM
I hope it won't be disqualified! This is a beautiful poem, Richard. I'm sorry I have not stopped by in a long while. I thank you for all your kind comments on my poetry.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 8:13:00 AM
I hope not but either way I'm happy to have a poem. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 3/6/2014 7:36:00 PM
The extra four lines make the poem better with more descriptiveness. Just correct the misspelled word in the third line of your second verse. The word "skys" is correctly spelled "skies". Everything else looks good.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2014 7:47:00 PM
Thanks Robert.
Date: 3/6/2014 7:33:00 PM
I'm glad you left in the over the mark four lines it's fine with me dude, I enjoyed your fine work on this poem it's a tribute to a hard working father and his daughter, very well done. cheri also thank you for your comment on my cougar poem. cheri
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2014 7:48:00 PM
No thanks required, it was my pleasure to read it.
Date: 3/6/2014 7:32:00 PM
I'm glad you left in the over the mark four lines it's fine with me dude, I enjoyed your fine work on this poem it's a tribute to a hard working father and his daughter, very well done. cheri also thank you for your comment on my cougar poem. cheri
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Date: 3/6/2014 11:46:00 AM
Hi Richard..From the comments below it seems this happening is not present.I love the way you described the sheltering to your son..by not revealing your pain..but yes when are children become adults its like having a child and a bestfriend.I'm sure Our father in heaven was your shelter in such difficult times..and I do believe everything in life happens for a reason We d later be grateful : )Lovely poem.Btw..tnks for supporting becca s sun glasses blog: ) : ) Cool
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2014 2:18:00 PM
It was my pleasure, a fun idea. Thanks for this thoughtful comment.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/6/2014 12:04:00 PM
Our ..I meant!! Oops sorry
Date: 3/6/2014 11:16:00 AM
So sorry for neglecting you, Rick! Being the dad of 5, I can certainly relate to this one! So very well expressed! However, if true about losing a job, with your knowledge of life and people, it shouldn't be long before that is recognized and you'll be on top of your game once again! Good luck, my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2014 2:19:00 PM
Happy to be gainfully employed. 4 years to go till retirement.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/6/2014 11:19:00 AM
Sorry, I didn't read through the comment to realize this is not current! I'm happy again!
Date: 3/6/2014 6:47:00 AM
I will be happy to unofficially un-disqualify you Richard...I will speak to Flo personally if need be, I've got a little pull with her ya know...Good stuff my friend! - Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2014 7:31:00 AM
Ha ha thanks, pull away my friend. It's good to have someone with some pull on the snide *lol*
Date: 3/5/2014 5:35:00 PM
Richard. I hope this is not a true story about you in this moment. This scenario is a sad one and yet all one can do is hope with faith in God. great inspiration you got from her contest!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2014 7:33:00 AM
Thanks, I was trying to place myself within my emotions.
Date: 3/5/2014 3:29:00 PM
well written, richard! yes, we do try to shield our kids from things and sometimes it's not the right move. you've captured that very well here. ~ glad the story is fiction...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2014 3:40:00 PM
Me too, I had quit my job back in May of 2013 but it didn't bring me to tears.
Date: 3/5/2014 2:03:00 PM
Fabulous poem Richard. It really struck a chord with me, We didn't tell our son about hubbies tests for cancer - didn't see right to worry him especially when the diagnosis took 2 years and it was major exam time for son. Love reading you poems Jan x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2014 3:41:00 PM
I can totally understand, I remember our conversation a while ago.
Date: 3/5/2014 10:29:00 AM
Excellent poem on the subject Richard..Glad you are employed...Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2014 10:43:00 AM
Me as well, thanks.
Date: 3/5/2014 9:46:00 AM
This will do well, Richard. So full of strength. Yes, we can't slow the process. My daughter is my strength...She helps me in my down times to think positively. Is this fiction? I sure hope so...about the job part, anyway. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2014 9:54:00 AM
No worries I am employed, thanks for being concerned.
Date: 3/5/2014 9:45:00 AM
Parent-offspring relationship, nicely tackled.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2014 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Paul.
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