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What You Are To Me

What You are to Me – Five Lines Always in lucid dreams, it’s you I see, ever like the North Star, constant and bright. My angel, you’re my heavenly delight! Your love, like truth, has set me free tonight. You’re my life and you’re most precious to me! Envelope Quintet: Rhyme Scheme: a,b,b,b,a 10 syllables per line 06-22-2015 Contest: Five Lines/Metaphors and Simile Sponsor: Sara Kendrick Placement: 1st

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Eric Boddie

Date: 7/31/2015 7:47:00 PM

since God Is our Father, that makes you a sister to me....since you are a woman, you are my destiny....since I think your heart is true, you are my friend....and since we have all this, nothing negative can begin....;)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/31/2015 8:30:00 PM

What a very precious expression! Even your comments you transform into beautiful poetry - all right now, Eric!:-)

Milton Robertson

Date: 7/7/2015 6:44:00 AM

Five lines that say it all. Simply Lovely.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/7/2015 7:54:00 AM

Awww! Thank you so much, Milton! Your compliments mean so much to me! Have a nice day! Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/3/2015 3:53:00 AM

Pandita you shine your romantic heart here..! COngrats!~Olive ELoisa =)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/3/2015 2:03:00 PM

Dear Olive, thank you so very much for your sweet compliments and continued support! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita

Honestly J.T.

Date: 7/2/2015 9:15:00 PM

Nicely done (7)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/3/2015 2:02:00 PM

Thank you so very much, JT! I am really happy you like it! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/1/2015 4:46:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome passionate winning write Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/1/2015 9:08:00 PM

Hi Dr. Upma, thank you very much for your kind compliments which I always appreciate! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2015 10:58:00 PM

Pandita Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/1/2015 9:07:00 PM

Thank you so very much, my friend, for your continued support and encouragement! Warmest regards. Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 6/30/2015 6:16:00 PM

Enjoyable romantic quintain, Pandita. Lovely words to your soul-partner! Congratulations on a merited win. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/30/2015 8:25:00 PM

Many thanks, dear Paul for your lovely compliments as always! Have a wonderful evening. Pandita

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/30/2015 3:49:00 PM

I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Detailed dreams of love.. Congrats on your win …Sara

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/30/2015 8:24:00 PM

Sara, I am so delighted as well that you honoured my work with such a high placement and lovely compliments! I enjoyed participating in your contest and it gave me a wonderful opportunity to try out a poetry form that I never tried before! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2015 10:29:00 PM

such a sweet one. Glad to finally see it on this winners' list.Congrats, dearie.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/30/2015 8:17:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Andrea! I am really happy you like it! Pandita

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/25/2015 7:34:00 AM

Pandita, this is so beautiful and romantic.The form was great as well as well. I'm glad I stopped by to view it this fine morning:)Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/26/2015 8:47:00 AM

Dear Alexis, thank you so very much for your sweet compliments and continued support! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 6/23/2015 8:27:00 PM

Hi Pandita, this is so sweetly romantic and I enjoyed reading this Envelope Quintet. I have to give this form a try soon! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/23/2015 8:34:00 PM

Awww - I am glad you like it! This is my first time trying this form so thank you for the sweet compliments! Pandita